Agent Tectonic

Eeeeey! Thank you very much. I have yet to actually feel 18. I guess it takes some time to sink in.

Ya, I hope so too. But in the current state of things, it's not looking likely.

Right, sorry. I didn't notice that, must've been more tired than I thought I was at the time. I fixed it and the Mental Raid ability, so now she can't control it and it only kicks in when she's in a state of panic. Sound reasonable enough?

I guess 'Hell' would be the best word I can come up with. My Grandmother passed away back in early February and my Mother found out that the restaurant she's working at is closing soon, so she's gonna have to find a new job fast. Hell, she wasn't even able to do much for my birthday this year because of how uncertain things are looking financially. I tried to tell her that it wasn't her fault, but I think she still feels like she let me down despite that. So in a nutshell, things aren't looking too good.

As for AHD. Ya, I'm still on board. I'm just having a hard time concentrating right now. I'll try to work on it tonight.

Oh, okay. I guess I'll not have her Mega Stone in the mean time. Unless of course, she can have it but she can't work it.

Oh... Should I not have Zelda have a Mega Stone? >_>

In my opinion, yes, Already 98 hours into it, and still going strong. Though I am getting annoyed at my progress vs preparedness and now every fight is a struggle xD.
And I know it's not healthy, but I'm having fun, and that's what matters.

Heh, though I have to wonder what maps he refers to as I have forgotten.
Anyway, I've pretty much activated hermit mode since mh4u came out and haven't talked to much of anyone outside the game or done anything :/

Nothing at all? I'm willing to listen to whatever.

Other than that, got anything to talk about?

Yeah, tell me about it. At least I have a chance to get good internet now.

Nice! I think it also helps that I'm a fan of armored warfare. At least, it's an interest of mine.

I'll be sure to check it out once my internet un-dies. Or we get a new router.

Ah! Nice! I know a guy who plays that game. And seemingly only that game. XD
I've heard it's really good, though.

Really? What game?

Hey Tec, how are you doing?

Ohh, before I review, is there anything you want me to focus on in PMD: Old Ashes?

O_O Wait, I forgot to give a review on your chapter at the end? I wrote it out though!

Lemme get back to the doc to write it up and actually post it this time. But from my standing, you have a very good prologue. I'll expand on the review in the doc.

Sure thing! I'll be happy to review it! :>

I'm here now.

You're welcome.

You're welcome.

I thought it was an interesting opening to a story, though I do wonder exactly how it will all play into the story. And, I do wonder how that Flygon will also play a part since I get the feeling he's going to die sometime very soon. So, as much as I'd like to give more impressions, it's a bit difficult to do when it's only a prologue. But grammatically and prose-wise, I believe you're quite fine.