I hope this doesn't seem weird, but I'm really excited to get some feedback, so I hope you're inclined to leave some on Epilogues - The Birth. Just figured I'd ask, because I have it up on another site where I have readers, but I put it up here to get some critique so I can improve on it.
Hi Asperger! I received your email and your comment on my profile. I've nevr read Diddy's work, but maybe I'll get a quick look now that my curiosity is piqued, hehe.