That's okay! Since you are a begineer, I would highly recommend going to the eta House: Redux located on the fanfiction section. You have to read the first page of the Beta House: Redux!
Well, I saw your fic. Not too good. You should really improve.
@:Yam Ryu: Wow! That is REALLY mean, why would you cyber bully a 9 year old? He is just a kid, jeez.