Ooh, Hellsing. Nice.
Hmm... it's an interesting idea, but I don't think that doing it thank way is very... effective? It seems like a good idea, but then, you're writing based on one single thing to improve on. It's not going to recieve critique because nobody will want to read it.
Haha, go for it.
Should be:
Scrafty @ Leftovers
Nature: Careful
EVs: 252 Hp / 8 Atk / 248 SpD
Ability: Shed Skin
- Drain Punch
- Crunch
- Bulk Up
- Rest
Hmm... sounds pretty good. We'll go over the rest tomorrow, I've got to go to bed.