Haha, excellent. Nicely written, could use some work, but still not bad. I suggest deleting that first chapter, though. It has nothing to do with the plot, since it's from an old story.
Also, if you haven't gotten to my appearance yet, I'd like to change a few things.
Character name: Nick Storm
Age: 14
Current Pokemon: (Shiny) Eevee, Abra, Swellow. Abra knows the elemental punches as Egg moves.
Finalized (for the league, they can still evolve) Pokemon: (Shiny) Umbreon, Riolu, Quilava, Alakazam, Swellow, Dragonair (doesn't want to evolve).
Appearance: Long black bangs, blue eyes, pale skin. Tall, built like a track runner, slim but muscular.