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Br0k3n s0Ul
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Oct 13, 2000 (Age: 19)
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Who would care?
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Team Member @ Culver's

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Br0k3n s0Ul

Br0k3n sOUl, Male, 19, from Who would care?

I'm baaaaaaaaack. Oct 25, 2018

Br0k3n s0Ul was last seen:
Apr 24, 2019
    1. Darkrai 888
      Darkrai 888
      Well good to see U again. I've been on pretty much everyday LOL!
    2. Darkrai 888
      Darkrai 888
      Hey, been a while. :)
    3. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Okaydoke :)

      Currently simultaneously reading the His Dark Materials trilogy by Phillip Pullman. Have you read it? The film was called The Golden Compass.
    4. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Thank you. I meant in the academic sense - though previously home educated and thus unfamiliar with the curriculum, that wasn't the reasoning for my placement in year ten rather than eleven.

      The prologue in Dragon Sent is a bit hard to read towards the end. I think it's because of the ambiguity of what's being said. It's good to have the characters as anonymous, however I think towards the end of the prologue they become a tad too mixed.

      I'm going to post a small part of the prologue.

      [SP] The other conspirator raised an eyebrow, “And the subject, do you still have control over her?”

      “Do you even have to ask?” questioned the roaring voice furiously, “The venom has subdued her will entirely and her… recruits… are suppressed by the fear she wields.”[/SP]

      The part where they say ""Do you even have to ask?" questioned the roaring voice furiously" is not a line I'm particularly fond of, for it brings in hostility a bit too quickly. That's good if you want to show the character's temperamental nature, however something about the way the sentence doesn't seem to fit the writing that precedes it. Perhaps it's "roaring furiously". Sorry I couldn't be more specific.

      However, I think overall this is a cool prologue; I particularly like how you made the characters anonymous. It's quite clever.

      Unfortunately that's all I can do for now, gtg :)

      Edit: so apparently idk how to use spoiler tags lol
    5. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      No, school. I'm a year lower than the usual for my age. If I'd joined in the correct year, I would've missed half my creative digital media course. Also, until I went to school in year 10 (so year 11 age) last year, I had been home educated. I'm not sure if that factored in to it, but I would wager that I'm not stupid, so presumably it wasn't due to that.
    6. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      *feedback.

      Sorry, just noticed. xD

      I will probably try reading it on my morning bus journeys.
    7. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      I am unable to read the book in its entirety atm. When I have read further, I will give you some feedback?
    8. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      skuttlermage@gmail.com
      If that doesn't work, try sgrey@daestudio.org
    9. darklord18
      darklord18
      nothing much just bored looking for a role play partner
    10. darklord18
    11. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Either or sounds good. Also, thanks, because that inadvertently reminded me to take a book for the trip to school, and my headphones, and I always forget.
    12. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Don't worry, many stories sound cliché when you get them down the rudimentals - including mine, so I'm not one to judge. Well, when it's finished, if it's ever finished, and you're rich and famous, I'll be sure to buy it. What's it called?
    13. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Fair enough, I was already intending to keep that in mind, but you reinforced it, so thanks. This book you speak of - what is it about?
    14. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      I have this problem constantly with words such as 'phrontistery' and 'amphibology' - I probably come off as over-eager. I can usually incorporate new words in to a written story with ease, however, verbally I probably appear quite pompous. Oh well, I suppose it's a learning curve.
    15. WhyBuffet
      WhyBuffet
      GLad0s... Okay, thank you.
      I just wanted to update the guild spreadsheet :)
    16. WhyBuffet
      WhyBuffet
      What is your IGN?
    17. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Lucida
      Astronomy. the brightest star in a constellation

      I also had trouble finding it (in fact I didn't, I had to find a note I'd made of it). So, there you go. I like that word a lot.

      That made me laugh, so, er, well done? I also find myself using 'redundant' excessively. Perhaps it's because it bolsters my image and makes me appear smarter than I am aha.
    18. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Merriam-Webster? I subscribed to their Word A Day but have since been disappointed. However I have got some lovely words from its main site, such as Lucida, and confirmation that Impavid and Abbozzo are real. So that's not to say that it's not useful, just that I like complaining, apparently. Plus Lucida is a very scenic word that I had no idea how to incorporate without sounding wildly off-topic or possibly cheesy.

      Yes, the purpose of this message is basically just to flaunt "Lucida". Also, it's quite likely I'm presenting as garrulous... my bad.
    19. Top Skuttler
      Top Skuttler
      Hello! Sorry if this seems a bit out of the blue; we've never conversed before. It's just that from reading your autobiography I got the feeling you took an interest in words. That piqued my interest as I have a bit of a passion for them. I'm just wondering, what kind of sources do you educate yourself with pertaining to vocabulary?

      I tend to use dictionaries and interesting websites such as phrontistery.info.

      Apologies if I came off a bit strong.
    20. Ascended Dialga
      Ascended Dialga
      [Welp, LU was just closed upon request. Apparently the clan leader is leaving Serebii.

      I think I'm gonna join another guild. Take a guess which. ;)]
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  • About

    Gender:
    Male
    Birthday:
    Oct 13, 2000 (Age: 19)
    Home Page:
    https://www.wattpad.com/user/Dragon-Sent
    Location:
    Who would care?
    Occupation:
    Team Member @ Culver's
    Favourite Pokémon:
    Mewtwo
    Nintendo Network ID:
    explosionpie
    Nintendo 3DS Friend Code:
    2105-8928-9693
    Those who know me might know I've been writing since I could hold a pencil. A smaller few might know that I'm writing a book. A still smaller number would know that I'm completely obsessed with my own imaginings, which has led me down many educational opportunities; mostly pertaining to vocabulary and science.

    Also, this is my spirit Pokemon: Darkrai
    Solitary and intense, your unique Soul is that of the Dark type Pokemon - Darkrai. A lone-wolf by nature, your fearsome independence has shaped your entire life. You are quick to judge and slow to let others in, but your instincts are so finely tuned that these qualities are allowed to serve you quite well. You are also a perfectionist at heart, preferring to tackle all of life's challenges solo as to guarantee it's quality by your own hands, rather than risk others mucking it up. All of this gives you a great weakness to people whose soul is of the Fighting type, whose honorable and disciplined outward appearance give you a false air of disheveled deceit and malicious intent in juxtaposition.

    Also, here's the Undertale character I most identify with:

    Asriel

    You are a thoughtful, affectionate, and loyal person. In most situations you come off as frightening and tough, but on the inside have many emotions swirling around in your mind. All you truly want is someone you love to love you back. Your loyalty to those around you is undying, and you will do anything to keep them there even if it means acting out irrationally. You love with your whole heart, and think with your whole mind leaving no space in-between.

    I'm also Sadness from Inside Out. You can tell I like personality quizzes.

    Apparently, out of the Hyrule Warrior's characters, here I am:

    Twili Midna:

    You're both beautiful and graceful, and dangerous as well. You've been through countless hardships, but those are exactly what's made you who you are today. You let nothing hurt the people you care about, and you know when you have to sacrifice for the greater good. Although there is a sense of authority about you, you're still very playful and fun. Not to mention, you shattered my heart at the same time as you shattered that mirror.

    Writing, reading, gaming are my hobbies.

    Oh, and I finished writing one book and one short story. Feel free to check them out at https://www.wattpad.com/user/Dragon-Sent. If you like them, be sure to let me know.

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