Hey! Thanks for the feedback! Just to answer a few things--Diantha probably gets all kinds of trainers with various attitudes. And considering her title, and the fact that I was envisioning this down to both their last Pokemon, Diantha was more focused on the battle anyway. (And it's not like she's law enforcement.) I can understand where you come from though. I have ADHD myself and I agree that it's jarring--but the bipolar disease is certainly needed (I made the edits thanks to you and Dramatic--ADHD is no longer mentioned). As far as the pokemon being used to describe colors, I guess it's more of a nerd thing XP. I can see where it would be confusing at a glance, though. As far as the scenery goes, I had Indigo Platue in mind, the Champion's room. In fact, if it were in front of crowds, he wouldn't be able to get to challenge the Elites immediately after losing to the Champion, right? I get it though--I didn't specify, but as you said, I was focusing more on the battle / trainer / Gardevoir. I hope it didn't frustrate you too much

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