Dracomaster16

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?630080-Submerged-Embassy&p=17293177#post17293177

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I'm going to say something, and I want you to listen. That goes for you to darkrai rulez. Just because you get some harsh criticism doesn't give you the right to insult the reviewer. Especially when the review was true. Your fic had alot of flaws that needed to be worked on. If you're looking for mindless praise, go to fanfiction.net, because here at Serebii we have actually review. And if you listen to your reviewers - whether you like them or not - you will get better. Complaining about them doesn't change the fact that the problems in your fic still stand.

Seriously dude, the story was good, try again man.

Ya, Yami posted on my fic too, it was very annoying. he seems to like picking on people. Besides, i liked your fic.

Dude, Yami and co. can be harsh, but for the most part they were trying to help you, so please, just listen to the reviews, and don' close the thread just cause Yami posts.

You shouldn't have had you fic closed.
People were just trying to help you.