it would really help me if you took the time to slow down and type your rp posts out properly. OR at least in a more readible format. I can't tell what is dialouge and what is action.
It's generally not a good idea to use * like we do in vms.
You are really supposed to type it out like a book.
please read some of my posts before we continue our rp.
(Im not being critical I just want to help you ^.^ otherwise you could get blocked from FB)