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Drat
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Aug 26, 2011
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Drat

Don't Bother None, from Downtown Saturn

Drat was last seen:
Aug 26, 2011
    1. Zibdas
      Zibdas
      Or maybe it's because it's D. Rat.
      Are you a rat, by any chance?
    2. Zibdas
      Zibdas
      Have you ever rea;ized that your name backwards is "Tard"? :O
    3. Maree
      Maree
      school as boring as ever?
    4. Maree
      Maree
      I know what you mean, I have orientation 2morrow & I have to get up early for it so I'm gonna go hit the hay. Night!
    5. Maree
      Maree
      Well then don't have him fight, just have him feed George an excuse for talking to Avery that contains something with his & Avery's plan in it and then George will ask Avery's it it's true and she‘ll quickly cover it up, maybe stomp on Vyk's foot if he tries to object. Then once George leaves to wait on customers, Vyk questions Avery and she's forced to tell him the truth.
    6. Maree
      Maree
      Or, since everyone else is still finishing up conversations and what not, you could have him get into a little fight with George and let some little detail about their plans slip and Avery has to lie to cover up Vyk's slip up. Which then results in Avery having to explain everything to Vyk
    7. Maree
      Maree
      Okay I posted. Hope I did a good job "convincing" Vyk to help out Avery (:
    8. Maree
      Maree
      Thank yu! ^-^
    9. Maree
      Maree
      You might want to add the fact that Vyk wants to go battle Bonsai to your post, you know, so Avery has something to use to get him to help her. A carrot, of sorts, to dangle in front of his face.
    10. Maree
      Maree
      True, true.
    11. Maree
      Maree
      I'm reading it right now, but I'm becoming tempted to join myself xD
    12. Maree
      Maree
      yay (: *Waits, attempting to be patient*
    13. Maree
      Maree
      Sorry, had to eat dinner XP
    14. Maree
      Maree
      Yeah...brb
    15. Maree
      Maree
      Well It was long but your such a good writer, i didn't even notice the length until i had finished reading it & had to scroll to the top of the post to check the spelling of something :X

      ^-^ yay! CC post! (Finally! XD patience is not a key virtue of mine)
    16. Maree
      Maree
      Yes it was quite long, but worth reading ^-^

      And, I'm just glad you realize that fact (:
    17. Maree
      Maree
      I read the Chapter! it was soooo long & weird & just plain funny!! (aka I really liked it ^-^)
    18. Maree
      Maree
      *gives you a thumbs up* ^-^
    19. Maree
      Maree
      Alright, sounds like a plan (: And let me know if you ever need a second pair of eyes to proof read anything. As I said in CSHC, typos are a pet peeve of mine (especially when they're my own posts Xp)
    20. Maree
      Maree
      ^-^ I feel smart now ;D

      & A New Chapter1 Yay! ^o^ What about CC?
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