Cool. The first two oranges are a little hard to tell apart (when matching small swatches to the larger areas, if that makes sense), and some labels on the map itself wouldn't be amiss, but it give a much clearer picture of setting. Are you going to allow people to be from outside the areas shown (for example the Chinese made some excellent clockwork, so a traveling tinker from the southeast, who happens to be in the area where the RPG starts, would make sense)?