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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    Believe I owe you a review. Boy can I relate to that one. Altitude will hsao water in a heartbeat. Learnt that when I went to New Mexico, 6000' in the air is DR. Y. This too. Still better than Alec's protein powder. Loving how you are going in depth on the generic "Mt Silver". Although...
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    Requiem (PG-13)

    Here I am! Skimmed this last night, will do the "pick-apart" thing in a minute, but before we get started, I have one question: What was the whole point of this whole two-chapter shark-jumping story inversion? We've done what, exactly? Kill off (Well, I kinda doubt that) the Wanderer...
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    Congratulations Alec, you are offically human... That's a tell... *insert MagLite commercial here... Whoah whoah whoah. Wrong thoughts there, human. Fully accurate for the moment, but its really not true. More or less quote this line here to be a placeholder, because I love how you've...
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    Requiem (PG-13)

    Its... well its good to be reviewing again. and by that I mean having you writing again. I was ttthhisss close to reaching out into the Missus' Facebook page and having her thump you one on me. ;) Hopefully in less than 6 months, I shall have something for you to read. But I won;t make my last...
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    I wonder if it wouldn't be unlike or synonomous to a Pokemon midst evolving? ;) As architects? Or dd they build the sucker just the two of them? I awlays hated those NPCs, "This is a Pokemon Center! It looks like every other Pokemon Center! Yay!" Again I ask, how does a Kirlia not know...
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    Requiem (PG-13)

    Actually, I understood the why of the doll, mostly I just have something against Banette... that Mega evolution did wonders for their looks... ---- Right, because THAT always works... First off, the F Psychics bit feels like a thought lost in the paragraph. Also, "He calmed" doesn't...
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    Well, this will be the third time I try to review this, hopefully the forum software is not hungry today... My apologies on not getting back sooner, I have a story in my head, and 19 pages later, the main character has so far managed to go from her bedroom to the forest behind her house and...
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    I feel like this doesn't read as well as it should. Makes sense to me, but I find mysrlf trpping across it as i read it. Either the creases in his forehead and between the ridges that protruded from his otherwise bare skull, all to please his trainer. This seemed excessive to the more...
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    Holding you to that!

    Holding you to that!
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    Dude quit running off when i show up! ;)

    Dude quit running off when i show up! ;)
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    Non-competitive trainer's hangout mk. III

    That's life, im afraid. I dont have xy yet, phoe,dont plan on it til i get a 3ds to play it on. So ill be. Of no help.
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    Well, I suppose a magician should never reveal his secrets, but aside from keeping odd hours of the night, this is what my laptop screen looks like. And yes, my laptop does have a seperate VGA port, think what I could do with SIX windows!!! --- That's what YOU think... I'm gonna go out...
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    Earth, Air, Water, Fire

    ... You summoned me, oh Great and Leafy one? *Snicker* Well, anyway, here I are. Let's se what I can pick apart to pieces and dash hopes and dreams. Mwa. Ha. Ha. Ha. Ha. Need a couple of line breaks there, or so I was taught, since you're showing the words of Person A and the action of Person...
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    Requiem (PG-13)

    *Cough Cough* This. Absolutely this. Its what I waspreaching when you asked how I wrote... andhen I got overwhelmed and burnt out, so you can see how well THAT worked. Yay! Duh-dum-bum! *Pow!* Boo! I;m reviewing. Her? Her Who? Obviously Shelton, but its a pronoun hanging in the wind...
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    Pokemon X and Y's Effect on the Anime

    Contests were really not his forte, and yeah,he left her out to dry like a good firend probably would, but there was a fair bit of coaching and training with Torchic in the beginning, once he got past "Iris Syndrome" and stopepd mocking the new girl.
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