Omegamon swung his right arm outwards, ejecting the Grey Sword from the dragon-shaped gauntlet in a sharp expulsion of smoke. Flames began to dance along the surface of the blade. Next, the Garuru Cannon burst from the lupine gauntlet of his left hand. He raised his arm and pointed the cannon straight at Belphemon. Shining white energy frothed from the muzzle of the Garuru Cannon, building up within the confines of the metal as he charged his attack.
I think you got his arms wrong. Grey sword is left. Garuru cannon is right.
Well, it seems somewhat watchable, then! Though the real question is, when are we going to finish Axis Powers Hetalia?
Yeah, well, you can always still get to those other writing projects someday! :3 Unless all of your works are monstrous epics like your Digimon fics, then maybe not. And two commas in the same sentence isn't bad, as long as they're in the right places. I completed my work as your beta/comma ax-er long ago!
Adding's kind of a pain on Discord, yeah. ._. I can add you if you give me your username and the four numbers under your username in the bottom left hand part of the Discord screen!
You can't make me!!!!!!!! ...Assuming Digimon is also, like, 600 episodes or something ridiculous.
Fair enough! I've actually run into the opposite problem - I can't focus on one chaptered story at once anymore. :') But yeah, who knows, maybe you'll get the last push of motivation you need to rewrite it sometime! Regardless, I'm glad you're still writing, really! I remember the days I used to beta and hit you with comma axes every 3 lines or so. Good times.
Yeah! So hit me up if you go on more and I'll add you and bug you hehehe
Huh. What Digimon do you want to be? And hey, Corphish wasn't a loser! Or Treecko! Or Atlas! ...Maybe Jeff. Just kidding. <3 And aw, darn. Well, if you ever get on again, you should totally add me anyway!!!
You write so much Digimon you're going to turn into one yourself soon, I think. :') Daedalus will miss you as his human writer. And I do have Skype, but I'm not really on it anymore. I have a Discord, which I have on in the background all the time like I did Skype. You have that?
Ah, that's still a a month or two away, okay. I don't think you ever told me what your degree was, lol. What'd you end up doing/what you gonna do an internship in? And hmm, well, I've been visiting the beach and doing lots of writing! I'm also considering going back to school... I must be crazy. :')