Well, if you want help, you could ask for it. I would be willing to help you get better. And Kutie Pie has been giving you good advice. As for why your threads have been getting deleted or locked, there is a good reason for it. You just need to learn to take criticism a little better. But if you want help or have any questions about your fanfic, ask me. You do have interesting ideas in your story. You just need to learn to present them better.
I'm not flaming you, I'm showing some concern towards you, it's one of two reasons I ever keep an eye out for your name (the other reason is because I always wonder what it is you're going to do next). But if you're going to be a jerkass over everything and refuse to grow up and take advise/criticisms, I might as well just not bother with you anymore.
As a side note, Electbuzz are native to Kanto. You find them around the Power Plant. Yeah, you can't get Elekid there (and, in fact, anywhere, considering you have to breed Electabuzz to get one), but the same story could be said for Pichu.