*Jean Grey*

I am going to herd then in Isshu, during Part 2. The remaining, alive Dexholders go to Isshu after Red murders Lucian, believing Isshu is a safe place. Unknown to them, this is exactly the place Donovan and Diane flee too, and only later on did Red realize his stupidity. I'll PM you the gist of Part 2. Did you read my first PM?

Oh, and the dexholders fight against each other. In chapter 17, Green (the girl) kills Platinum like the video below.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O8wLU6E8Zsg&feature=related

I may write more than that, there are 2 parts you see, and continuity dictates me to write at least 30...

Ok. Are 14 chapters enough for you? Because if it isn't, you can write more or write less, or write an epilogue.

Yeah, I work it so somehow, Spheals are everywhere XD

Oh, we just forgot about those Spheals! My character will step on Spheals 5 times in a chapter. It doesn't notice them, though.

He'll escape a few times because of Blue and Green's warnings, and my character gets framed, so eventually, we would be forced to leave Sinnoh and go far away to Isshu to escape my eventual capture, as I was framed for kidnapping Red.Red shoots Lucian as he is connected to me, and he frees Blue and Green shortly after we flee, not knowing where we were headed for. After a few weeks, they, too decide to leave for Isshu and convince the other dexholders to do the same, as they think that Isshu is free from danger. Little did Red know that it was his stupidest move ever.

How does Red escape from my character?

Yep, Red will be very hard to stalk in my crackfic. What I've been posting on the game threads really happen in the fic

Ok, who's the 2 males?


EDIT: Let me guess..... Lucian and Giima...

Great then! Your character is also going to be a guy-hater. So whenever Diane (Yes, that's my real name) brings home a guy, Flyingpichu64 will usually torture him and scare him away, except if it's Red. Only 2 known males survived your attacks.

Yeah, make it capable of using a gun. It might almost kill Red.....

Plus, your Pichu character annoys my Pokemon too, like latching on my Tyranitar's back and trying to ride on my Houndoom. If you like, I could make it capable of using a gun, it would be funny....

Ok. It's fine for me.

Hmm, we'll be a criminal tag team then! XD

Ok. But for the kidnapping, the Pichu kidnaps Yellow for almost pushing it into a well.

My character is actually a rich, formerly wanted criminal. I'll put in a murder attempt for Pokedex Holder Pearl, as he annoys me...how about that?

Oh, and can you add kidnapping and murder at the 3rd chapter? Just because I watch too much Higurashi.

I'm writing the part where Ditto starts sneaking up on Pikachu at night. this is the end of the prologue. The first chapter starts on the 64th egg

Hi, what part are you on?