I must say I'm very impressed! One thing struck me as odd, your character has some things that really really remind me of my own character. like the blonde hair, and determination, and a closet smart person. haha :3
so like, i had the biggest crush on him right? he admitted he liked me last year...and i was like OMG <3
then around october, he asked me out. i said no...and that was that. for months i was like, still dwelling on it and then in december, i had enough balls to ask him out. so he said yes and it was awesome. <3
then we broke up..he did it in the most jerk way ever, in front of everyone. ._.
then like, back in april i stupidly asked him out again, but he had been lying to me so i ended it this time. =)