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NavyLatios
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Dec 21, 2011
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Birthday:
April 29
Location:
Brazil, nothing beyond that!
Occupation:
Student

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NavyLatios

Luster Purge rules!, from Brazil, nothing beyond that!

NavyLatios was last seen:
Dec 21, 2011
    1. Alfred Jones
      Alfred Jones
      How come you're leaving?
    2. Alfred Jones
      Alfred Jones
      Another person who loves Latios ^^
    3. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      That's too bad. Oh well, at least Poké Effect will (most likely) be left in good hands.

      Make sure your readers know of this, otherwise your brother will be accused of stealing. Also, I'd suggest that you have him redo chapter 1, just so the whole thing is his work. Otherwise, it'd be a bit of an awkward shift.

      I wish you luck with college and your new job, my friend. ;)
    4. NavyLatios
      NavyLatios
      Well, there are four consecutives POVs, but they are enough since the last one is when Wilson meets Latias in her Pokémon form.

      There is one that's a bit small, but I guess it fits the story.
    5. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      As long as it isn't a POV switching fest, then a couple of POVs would be fine. Just make sure that readers aren't being dragged by their toes to another POV shortly after arriving at one.

      To be safe, try and limit POVs to only the important ones, and make them count. We don't want to be reading every character's mind, now do we? ;P
    6. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Sounds good. Hopefully, Latios won't accidentally destroy nice things with his Aura powers. XD
    7. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Your new story has a review now. Thank the gods of productivity. XD
    8. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      I read it. Sadly, I can't summon up my reviewing skills tonight either. Again, as a whole, it's an improvement from when you first started writing, I think. Expect my review as soon as the laziness goes away I can get those capabilities back. :P
    9. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      I'll keep a look out for it. Sadly, I don't think I can summon up my reviewing powers tonight. But if a miracle occurs, then I'll see what I can do.

      Also, I don't know the hairstyle. Sorry. Thankfully, we have a magical thing in this universe that'll help us with another solution: raw description using raw words without any fancy "mohawk" this or "afro" that! ;P
    10. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Interesting. First-person narration isn't all that common (at least among chaptered stories) as far as I know. That should be a curious twist. Also, I'm guessing that the Pokémorph was spliced in a lab or something? If so, watch out for ripping off Dragonfree's Morphic. That wouldn't end very well for you.

      Hopefully, you can come up with an attention-snagging title to lure innocent lurkers in. At least, 500 views would be better than 470. :P
    11. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Good luck. Just remember that you'll be running two fanfics at the same time at your own risk. Be careful that neither story will get away from you. Time seems to work against you whenever there's a critical moment, and this might not be an exception.
    12. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      I see. Sounds like one crazy trio to think about. It'd also (unless the other protagonists are more like secondary characters) be interesting to have more than one protagonist running about. You could switch points of view between the three, for the best effect.

      I have a crossover or two in mind, and they seem to be epic ideas. Then again, one of them'll be less based on Pokémon, and will have to reside in the way less active section for other fanfics. -_-
    13. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Heh. It'll be great to see that. Shepard is the level-headed protagonist who'll suddenly meet his panic maker.

      Shepard: ...

      Alien: LEAAAAALEALEAL!

      Shepard and crew: 8O

      It'd be a milk-snorting change of mood, if you get my drift. Anyways, which Pokémorph and 'Mon do you have in mind?
    14. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      A Mass Effect and Pokémon crossover? Now THAT would be something. *imagines intergalactic Mewtwo blowing up ships* Aw, yeah. X'D

      I have given my infamous, lengthy, grammar nazi review for your latest chapter. Sorry, I just can't help myself with turning error searches into a game that I complete 95% or more.
    15. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      Good luck with that if you do get some juicy ideas. Should it happen, though, then I'd suspect it'd be rated R, knowing the general nature of Mass Effect. With that, you'd have to PM the first bit of the story to one of the Fan Fiction section's mods to have it approved. Just a reminder.
    16. Wyrm
      Wyrm
      In case it's not the first thing you view the next time you come on here, I have given my review for your story. Keep up the good work!
    17. Blue Snover
      Blue Snover
      I'm so sorry, i forgot all about it.

      I'll take a look for you.
    18. Darkrai'sShadow
      Darkrai'sShadow
      Could you continue notifying me when you post new chapters please? :)
    19. Blue Snover
      Blue Snover
      I'll make sure to read them both tomorrow for you, but i have to head out.

      See you tomorrow hopefully.
    20. Darkrai'sShadow
      Darkrai'sShadow
      Thanks for telling me about your fic! I read it immediately. :)

      Also, I gave a semi-thorough review that's actually more thorugh than what I just made it sound to be. xD

      Lastly, I have a fanfic of my own, but it's not posted on Serebii. It'd be great if you could review it. The only problem is you'd have to join my clan, Primus et Ultimus, in order to get access to the clan forum. You don't have to if you're not interested, though.
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    Birthday:
    April 29
    Location:
    Brazil, nothing beyond that!
    Occupation:
    Student
    Favourite Pokémon:
    Latios
    Just a random guy that loves writing! XD

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