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pokeking325
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pokeking325

Let's do our best., from Florida

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    1. harryheart
      harryheart
      Here is Chapter 16 - better late than never - Chapter 16
    2. harryheart
      harryheart
      Hi Just thought that I'd remind you about Chapter 12 being out - please comment on what you think
    3. harryheart
      harryheart
    4. harryheart
      harryheart
      Oh...yea I did and I'm reviewing later on today as I didn't have time yesterday sorry, I think the plot line is good just need to work on description and not crowding it into one sentence and also grammar but I can't really help you there as I also let myself down on that field...do you have a beta?
    5. duncan
      duncan
      As long as you're improving then you've got no problems. You'll get there eventually.

      And yeah, I do the same thing. So many great fics around here are good for teaching you different skills.
    6. duncan
      duncan
      The server has been having errors like crazy lately.

      That's great, once you get writing it's surprising how fast you pick it all up. Especially with the reviewers here, they're some of the best. Don't worry if you don't get good reviews, believe me when I say you learn much more from a negative review than a positive one.
    7. duncan
      duncan
      Yeah, the server made you double post. It's been happening to me as well lately.

      Heh, the first fic I ever wrote I worked on for years and years, I know. And yeah, I've been writing since 2002.
    8. duncan
      duncan
      Thanks. I hear you, it's difficult to find a fic and stick with it. You should see my hard drive, I've got a million unfinished fics because I lost interest. You just have to find something that you really like and go for it.
    9. harryheart
      harryheart
      I certainly will do...can you post me a link?
    10. duncan
      duncan
      No worries, I think I'm the last person to complain when I'm behind on about ten fics myself.
    11. TheDarkMaster
      TheDarkMaster
      ...Polelover? No. o.O
    12. harryheart
      harryheart
      You'll need to speak to a mod about that...I had same problem with trying to post Chapter 9
    13. harryheart
      harryheart
      okay...look forward to your reviews and cant wait to read the fic you create
    14. harryheart
      harryheart
      And also I read your story and liked the plot idea...writing style could be better...but Oh well! And also cant post in it because its more than a month old!

      Sorry!
    15. harryheart
      harryheart
      Also could you please review my Chapter! Thanks
    16. harryheart
      harryheart
      GO to user cp and then click on edit Signature and add in the IMG tags and then paste the link
    17. TheDarkMaster
      TheDarkMaster
      I'm not sure. o.O Who do you think I am?
    18. harryheart
      harryheart
      New Chapter of Max's Hoenn Journey out!

      Chapter 11
    19. ShinjiLover
      ShinjiLover
      As soon as I saw that site, I absolutely HAD to join! <3 I'm so glad I did.
    20. ShinjiLover
      ShinjiLover
      That's because BMGf sucks. ^_~ I was really only there to post my fanfics.
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