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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

What about Victor?

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

WAAAAAAAAAIT! What's his name?

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

Chapter 1 is clomplete! Wait...clomplete? Aah, who cares. Anyway, I finished it!

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

No stress, I sent you a huge chunk of the chapter just now.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

ok. I kinda lost my steam.

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

SOunds like a good idea, I'll PM you the rest all at once.

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

Snivy is FTW! Start with Snivy!

Or, if you want him to start with Tepig, let's just agree to disagree and have him get an Oshawott.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

Why don't you finish the first chapter?

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

In case you're wondering how I typed all those zoruas so fast, it's a little method I like to call...
Copy
And
Paste

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

You PM doof. So which starter?

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

Oh, that. OK then, Snivy.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

But I mean, like, he's all beat up on the road and stuff, and then a Zorua comes out and sees him and won't leave him.

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

Zorua is a GREAT Poke to start with! He wouldve been my secondary had he not been by event only.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

By choice, I mean.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

That's like chapters down the road. I sent you part 1 of Chapter 1.

How about after his pokemon gets stolen a Zorua joins him?

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

OK then. Just remember not to make it so he's suspecting of Ghetsis at the beginning--he needs to "overhear" something.

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  razorrozar7

• Jun 4, 2011

I think he should be in Plasma for a while at the beginning. I'm going to write the first chapter and send it to you to see what you think.

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  Jonah the Slaking

• Jun 4, 2011

OK, so he's a member of Team Plasma and he leaves to go on a grand adventure. Since Unova is where Team Plasma is based that could make for at least 13 good plot elements!