Hi there! How are you?
I checked your fic just now out of curiosity. For a first time writer, you are pretty good, although with several errors, but that's natural, happens all the time. Keep up the good work and take that writing talent to new heights.
If you have time, care do a review for my fic BlackWhite: Season XY? Particularly, I want the ''Theft'' Chapter Two reviewed. And please, write the review in a VM or a PM, it will make me feel comfortable that way. Thanks.