Just finished the Prologue. Hot stuff, you definitely have a lot of great methods to hook the reader into diving right in. Makes me wonder if Eris or Kaxo will have a cameo in this, or if you just want to handle the whole thing with your own cast of characters. Either one is fine!
But yeah, I like your writing style, it has great emotion, style, and soul. It's an honor to have something like this made for an RP Meeker and I made together.
Well, how long has it been since your last update? I'd say at least wait four days or so in between updates, that way you give your story some time to settle and get read before you add a new chapter.
And, if you need to wait with the new chapter, go back through it and revise. There's always more revising that can be done, trust me. And it's good to wait a few days after you finish a chapter, as you're more likely to find errors.
Well, do you ever see that yellow "Auto-Saved" notification in the corner right pop up whenever you're in the process of constructing your post?
That helps save your progress of the post, that way you could simply leave and come back. When you do come back, there will be a little grey button in the bottom left that says "Restore Auto-Saved Content". Click on that, and your progress from before will load back up, allowing you to continue your post.
I don't mean to be some prowling minimod of the RP, but your posts manually auto-save, that way you can expand them later own via the "Restore Auto Saved Data" (somewhere along those lines). Please don't take this the wrong way. Just some advice.