Well, of course you've gotta keep on practicing, cause that's just the way writing goes. How long are you Halo fanfictions?
Right? I know they were trying to make it seem like you were Chelle, but... I dunno, I feel like they should have elaborated on her personality some more.
Anyways, I'm gonna be on a small hiatus until Spring Break starts, so might not answer my VMs right away. Sorry 'bout it!