And... I'm done! Ohoho... I really like how you've characterized Chelle and GLaDOS's relationship. It makes a whole lot of sense. I mean, when you're playing the game, you're stuck in a first person view - and who knows what Chelle's thinking about in all of this? You never get to see her expression, so you never really think about what she felt to see GLaDOS - and boy, was she probably freaking out on the inside.
The only thing I couldn't figure out, however, was the part where you said there was terrible writing. 'Cause I didn't see it.
Woah... it's been, like, decades since I last saw you. But hey, you're back! =D Any-who, sorry I didn't respond to your visitor message until now. I kinda went on a hiatus around the start of the year. 'Probly shoulda checked my messages instead of dropping off the face of the planet, but aw well...
Anyway, how you been? You still into the RPing business?