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*note: Oh, and Breezy? sorry again (yes, I get the message that it's not first person AND I tend to be skimpy with details, AND sorry for not listening to you the first time AND finally I'm a dork, so sorry about that too...) but let me explain. In a blunt description. it's 3 1/2 person- told by narrator, details and everything else by main character. so the way the story is told is neither first person or third person. So can you stop blowing up at me? I know tha it's not told right, but then I can't think of any other way to tell the story, so there. Please don't kill me.
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Further proof you didn't read- I am NOT Breezy and Breezy is NOT me, unless you are very belatedly and laggedly reading all of her post now :/
btw do yourself a favor and don't listen to whatever asperger says- the user failed to listen to critisism from not only me but about four other authors trying to help. Then in a pitiful and pathetic display of spite, spammed my inbox.