Well, I was saying how horrible it was. The least you could have done was not take xmikeyxlikesitx's EXAMPLE and also you could made the title look nicer. My brother types on Face Book with all those words like lol and whatnot, yet he still does fine here. He also texts with text talk, but types normal here. If you read the SPPf Rules, you'd know it is not recommend to type like that here since it is annoying and can get hard to understand.
Now, ask a mod to close your fanfiction and just don't post stuff like that until you work on your typing and such, although that would take forever with you. Also, just type normally here and try to be a normal and reasonable member here and we wont have any problems.
Also, read the FanFiction & Advice for Aspiring Authors Threads.