Aah, ooh, gosh, wow, thanks, um...
I'm super busy until about the 10th of August - I've got two outstanding units for my uni degree that I need to hand in on the 9th. However, I'm mostly all finished so it shouldn't be a problem but don't be worried if my response is a little after the 6th. I'll try to get it done before then.
The next few days are gonna be pretty light for me so what I'll do is I'll run over your entire fic again to post a general review of the full story, etc and a comparison of your first chapters and last chapters in terms of style and how I think you've improved. Once you post the final chapters, I'll add on a full review of both of them and what I think of the story's completion and then post it all asap nearest the posting of the final chapter. Does that suit?
As a side-not, just for catching up sakes as I notice it's been like ayear since we last spoke - honestly had no idea so much time had passed - I just thought I'd update you on things: I've kinda given up writing myself, everything seems to be getting in the way lately - ie, uni, life, etc. But, with two months completely free coming up, I'm hoping to start it all up again with a fresh story - just something short, maybe only ten to twelve chapters. i was wondering if you would be willing to look over some snippets in the net couple of weeks and give me some feedback - I've been out of the game for so long, I need someone who'll be honest with me to give me a verdict before posting it all and stuffs. Whaddya say?
Sorry for long message *mwah*