Obviously it will take me some time to read it all, but from what I have read, I think you have done a brilliant job. The characters, dialogue and descriptions are well written - simple, but accurate. It has been some time that I have been genuinely intrigued by a story. Bravo, I'm looking forward to reading them both in full. Don't worry about mistakes, everyone makes them. Just be confident in what you do and you'll improve in no time
To answer your question, I love Apollo Justice as with all AA games, but I do prefer the first three games a little more.
To answer your question, I love Apollo Justice as with all AA games, but I do prefer the first three games a little more.