I'm not much of a BETA. If you want me to help, then I will read over and work with you to improve your first chapter by teaching you the grammar skills necessary to write properly. You will then be on your own on your second chapter, and I will come in to review it afterward to judge your progress. Then you should be good to be on your own.
Grammar is not a hard thing to learn, it's how to write well that needs the practice.
Grammar is not a hard thing to learn, it's how to write well that needs the practice.