Oh, I don't mind at all! Actually, when I saw what the other posters posted here, I started going through your Fanfic, though in the first chapter, you appear to miss a lot. Such as forgetting apostrephies, these things ' . Or misspelling words or pokemon, such as evee, which should be Eevee.
But, I did like how it started out, and while it was sorta Ash-like, you made it a twist by making his family give the pokemon.
Also, I liked that you had him dislike Eeveein the beginning.
If its true what the Previous Poster said, then I truly hope that there will be improvement between the first and the current chapter.
Oh yeah, I'm sorry for being sorta nitpicky on this but, how about updating the chapters with better grammar and such?
I do like your fanfic, I really do. I just found this to be some pretty big faults.
Oh yeah, I accepted your friend request. And yeah, it's true. I do like fanfics a lot.
Well, I'll look forward commenting again!