No to be honest I don't think it really has helped you out- nor do I think you're really listening to what I'm saying. Because if you were you would stop ****ing posting a chapter every time you come on and realise maybe if I work on them some more, before posting, then maybe I'll get some other reviewers.
And you know actually give it a plot outside LOLITSGAMEINWRITING!
And you know actually give it a plot outside LOLITSGAMEINWRITING!