What happens with Nolafus depends on how much you skimmed. The seventh chapter was the chapter he was supposed to die, or at least come very close. He's supposed to wake up in a hospital at the end, or I tried to hint at it. I was worried that the chapter didn't come out alright. If you have to time, do you think you can read the seventh chapter? It's relatively short compared to the others, but if you can't that's fine. I don't mean to pressure you. If you meant what happen next, after the seventh chapter, I'm not going to reveal that. In fact, I'm not sure quite yet. I've been writing the story on how it plays out in my head. Truth be told, Nolafus falling down wasn't supposed to happen. I was stuck with writer's block and that part just came out. The only thing I'm sure of is how the story is going to end, what happens up until that part is up to the characters. They play out the story, I just write it down, if that makes sense.
I used to rate other people's teams, but that was mostly because I felt that no one here was giving really stellar advice. I thought I was really good at it, until I made some pretty bad mistakes and there's always Platinum Dude over at PC. He can find a way to improve any team. I never really got into this specific forum, but maybe that will change. With college starting on Monday, I doubt that will happen though.