Well, you see, the thing is that it's more or less based off of the book Roadside Picnic, which introduced the idea of zones, anomalies, stalkers, and artifacts. And THE S.T.A.L.K.E.R. games as well, those had the same idea of stalkers, the zone, and anomalies. Basically, I'm just making my contribution to the stalker sub-genre.
Thanks for your time, and I'll keep all that in mind. I do feel that you're being picky with the description thing, but whatever. My writing style is a lot more to-the-point than Knightfall's which tends to have very long chapters and lots of description. You have to keep that in mind. But I know that it can be improved, don't get me wrong there.