Hey, I took a look at your sample on the Fire Emblem RPG, and I have to say this.
It was great. Amazing even. Alot of detail.
And while that is what makes it good for me, that is where there is a problem.
As stupid as it sounds, most RPers on Serebii won't really look at it too long.
I used to do posts like this, but I realized that people wouldn't read the whole thing, they would just skim it. And then I had problems with their posts interfearing with my past ones.
So, on here, you might want to tone it down a bit on the detail.
I for one like it your detail. but it gets annoying having people ignore my posts, and I don't want you to have to go through that. Just a suggestion though. Sorry if I bothered you n_n;