Thank you. I meant in the academic sense - though previously home educated and thus unfamiliar with the curriculum, that wasn't the reasoning for my placement in year ten rather than eleven.
The prologue in Dragon Sent is a bit hard to read towards the end. I think it's because of the ambiguity of what's being said. It's good to have the characters as anonymous, however I think towards the end of the prologue they become a tad too mixed.
I'm going to post a small part of the prologue.
[SP] The other conspirator raised an eyebrow, “And the subject, do you still have control over her?”
“Do you even have to ask?” questioned the roaring voice furiously, “The venom has subdued her will entirely and her… recruits… are suppressed by the fear she wields.”[/SP]
The part where they say ""Do you even have to ask?" questioned the roaring voice furiously" is not a line I'm particularly fond of, for it brings in hostility a bit too quickly. That's good if you want to show the character's temperamental nature, however something about the way the sentence doesn't seem to fit the writing that precedes it. Perhaps it's "roaring furiously". Sorry I couldn't be more specific.
However, I think overall this is a cool prologue; I particularly like how you made the characters anonymous. It's quite clever.
Unfortunately that's all I can do for now, gtg
Edit: so apparently idk how to use spoiler tags lol