Hey, thanks for the rate on my first fan fiction. I am intending on keeping the Tropius, haha. I saw you mentioned "Show don't tell" a lot, which I've been reading about all over websites. I intend to try and use it a lot more in my writing. If you don't mind, I'd just like to ask a few quesitons.
In my new version of the story, I'm trying to think of ways for Cody to obtain a Tropius. My first thoughts were the bog standard from a professor, but I'd like to take a different route. Possibly something along the lines of..It was his family pet and he took it on an adventure with him or something. I'm not sure, though. Do you have any suggestions?
Second question, can you describe some more of what you meant by "Show, don't tell?"
And the last question I have for you, what advice do you have for re-reading through work?
Oh, an extra: Do you have a fan fiction I can read?
Thanks for you time, and sorry about all these spaces. They're just the way I like to do things, space them out.
In my new version of the story, I'm trying to think of ways for Cody to obtain a Tropius. My first thoughts were the bog standard from a professor, but I'd like to take a different route. Possibly something along the lines of..It was his family pet and he took it on an adventure with him or something. I'm not sure, though. Do you have any suggestions?
Second question, can you describe some more of what you meant by "Show, don't tell?"
And the last question I have for you, what advice do you have for re-reading through work?
Oh, an extra: Do you have a fan fiction I can read?
Thanks for you time, and sorry about all these spaces. They're just the way I like to do things, space them out.