Disclaimer: Apologies if some of the grammar information is redundant for you as I'm not sure what you learned from when you first started this story to where you are now.
Think of semicolons as weaker periods. They are mostly used to connect two complete sentences based...
That's good. I've been trying to update some of my other stories, but this Lull prequel keeps begging me to write it.
And yes, very true. :P Nothing too memorable really, just a lot of work and whatnot.
I'm not sure if you necessarily need the comma after "217." It creates an awkward pause. In a similar vein, your semicolon is too strong for this sentence; a comma would be better. (Note: semicolons are used to connected independent clauses that are roughly about the same topic.)
Shadow Lucario, you already have a profile (on the first page). I updated the link so your latest profile is the link, but in the future, please edit your profile instead of creating a new one. Thanks. =)
I haven't been here in a while, but luckily I keep archives of my reviews. ;P
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