Truly a great fic and wonderful ending. I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. The humor was great, the characters were great, basically everything was great.
Ho-oh's reason behind showing up was especially funny and Umbreon ending with a the end was very pleasing. All in all this fic...
Wow! I have been away from this site for awhile haven't I. Three new chapters posted. DARN YOU INTERNET, WHY DO DISTRACT ME SO!
Well time for some of favorite parts of the chapters.
Oh my, those poor stairs they must be in pain.
Hey at least you aren't a crippled girl in a wheelchair...
A wild Chapter suddenly appeared.
It's a Eusine. Wonderful addition simply wonderful.
Look out here comes the Suicune Man! XD
Oh, Umbreon only you would say something like that, and Rui's Quagsire is epic.
Yes, that makes perfect sense. It's all Miror B! It's all HIM!!
Good work again...
I am very Happy!
Hooray for conveniently placed mattresses.
A very nice sweet scene. ColosseumShipping FTW!!!!
Don't worry Espeon I'd be as confused as you too. Though I think I know what Umbreon is trying to talk about, but I'm not really sure.
LMAO!XD Love it...
Yet another great chapter as all ways.
What kinda show is that? Though it doesn't matter as its all made of win anyway.
hehheheh, Tom scares me.
Somewhere a plasma grunt is yelling PPPLLLLAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSMMMMMAAAAAAAAA
Perfect line for the perfect makuhita.
Ah, that's so sweet...
YEAH, BABY!! Well I'm happy to see a new chapter in your wondrous re-write of Colosseum.
What would be the best way to show how funny I think these lines are.
Umbreon always seems to have some of the best lines. :)
:confused: :p Hahahahahahahahahahahah
And five and five is...
Been awhile since I was last here, and I see that there are now 12 chapters. Well anyway I have I enjoyed reading the new chapters, and I growing to like how charaterized Michael even more. All in all I really like how its all turning out.
Its finally here. Not that I'm complaining about how long it took, I could have waited for this for a long time.
As usual I'm in awe of how you worked out the humor. I loved reading every sentence. I also liked the little Miror B. plot you put in.
And now for ...
I was wondering if there might be a way to improve my Scizor without getting another.
Sp. Atk 81
Sp. Def 92
Also thanks TheBlueRabbit, Icosahedron, and CheapChap for all the help you gave me.
To be honest I have only read one volume of DPA. I use to have a few of The Electric Tale of Pikachu, but I lost them (Ha, I'm an idiot). The reason it is more often discussed I would think is that it seems more or likely more well know. Some of them haven't been heard and might never be seen...
I really loved it. I really like how you added humor to the story of Pokemon Colosseum. All the chapters were AWESOME.
I also liked many of the references.
Hooray for Bulbapedia.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I'm still laughing. They must really not like that song.
HAHAHAHA I still can't get over...