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  1. DreamSayer

    Light Through the Blinds

    What a mysterious beginning. Here we have a group of associates suddenly waking up seemingly in the past with no memory of how they got there or what they're doing there. It begs many questions which I'm sure will be unfurled in due time. For now, I can say that I am indeed intrigued by the premise.
  2. DreamSayer

    System:Reboot (PMD)

    Okay, this scene made me cackle a bit. I like how Backdoor was basically "Lol nope!" when the Xurkitree's decided to go violent, and boy, even he should know that summoning more is a bad idea at this point, come on! Backdoor, when will you learn?
  3. DreamSayer

    A Mew Me: Reborn

    Hey, i can't believe i'm only just now responding to this even though i left a like on it lol. I'm glad you liked that chapter and Celebi's personality. I'm still in the process of polishing and revealing Celebi's true intentions and goals, so, stay tuned!
  4. DreamSayer

    The Review Game

    I made a review of Guiding Light I'd like to request a review of my story A Mew Me. It's a story about a girl raised by Mew who ends up becoming a Mew herself and inherited all the life struggles that come with it.
  5. DreamSayer

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Guiding Light [COMPLETE]

    Chapter 10 Review Well, this chapter revealed to us the team Braviary and Metagross used to be part of: Team Men in Black. Pretty cool name for a team too might I add. I liked the fact that Torracat tried to reason with Prisma to stop listening to her abusive captain, even if that made him...
  6. DreamSayer

    A Mew Me: Reborn

    Chapter 5: Closure A few hours had passed when Kuki finally decided to stop crying. She lay on the cold hard floor of the shrine, staring blankly at the wall with reddened eyes with little to no movement. She held her ears as she tried forcing herself to fall asleep throughout the night, but...
  7. DreamSayer

    A Mew Me: Reborn

    Hehheh, admitedly, I wrote that first scene before I decided what to do with the rest of the story, hence the rather mischievous act in the opening. I must agree, the first chapter was very rushed in retrospect, but I've slowed down the pacing in later chapters and added more moments to spend...
  8. DreamSayer

    The Child of Thorns - A Platinum story.

    Chapter 1 Review I must say, the opening of this chapter got me pretty interesting in what the rest of it had to offer. It raises a lot of questions and keeps one wanting to know more.You should be careful with this trope however, as it can hurt the impact of some scenes leading up to that...
  9. DreamSayer

    Government System in Pokémon Fanfics

    As we all know, Gamefreak has made the concept of a ruling body in Pokémon game regions pretty vague and somewhat nonexistent, which somewhat makes the Pokémon League the default form of government. That can be problematic when you think things realistically because The league being in charge...
  10. DreamSayer

    Serebii Discord Server

    So, is this conversation closed now or something?
  11. DreamSayer

    [T] Land of the Roses

    CHAPTER 4 REVIEW Well, the post mortem scene wasn't as irritating as I imagined it would be, but that's a good thing lol. Not all that much happened in this chapter, but you did introduce a few new fakemons, the most prominent one being the Blastcap fungus. Though its introduction was info...
  12. DreamSayer

    Moonlit Blossoms

    Prologue Review You seem new around these parts, so, I decided to give this story a try and honestly, I'm impressed by the prologue alone. Your use of description is definitely on point, and while you struggle to find a balance between purple prose and adequate prose, you succeed in doing the...
  13. DreamSayer

    System:Reboot (PMD)

    Man, this N0ize fella sure is noisy... I'll show myself out... But before I do, I liked that we finally got to see more of Annie's adventures, and her Perpetual lack of self awareness. Seriously, if it wasn't for her band of misfits, she'd probably be dead by now lol, or seriously hurt. At...
  14. DreamSayer

    Pokemon Shine Diamond

    Review for Chapter One When I started reading this, I thought it was just going to be a rehash of the anime or the games featuring Dawn. What I didn't expect was for it to be a combination of both. I do like the fact that you're trying to incorporate both of them because folks like Barry...
  15. DreamSayer

    Astral Genealogy [Pokémon Fanfiction]

    Review for Chapter 1 I'm not usually up for stories that deal with royalties, kingdoms and whatnot, but I can tell that this one has some things going for it. I am curious to learn what this Komo'o King wants with a clefairy and what his motivations are. The chapter hints that he needs her...
  16. DreamSayer

    A Mew Me: Reborn

    Chapter 4: Broken Kuki's eyes pried open to the sight of a full moon obscured behind flowing clouds. She saw large thick trees surrounding her, the tree crowns packed densely together that they almost blocked the sky from being seen down below. Half her body was submerged in a puddle, her...
  17. DreamSayer

    A Mew Me: Reborn

    Thanks for the review, Chibi! And yes, Mewtwo is definitely going to be a major game player from this point on. However, he may not necessarily be a full on villain. We'll just have to wait and see.
  18. DreamSayer

    Fan Fiction Recommendations & Reviewers' Leaderboard

    Heroes After All 1 point Seafaring Travels 1 point System: Reboot 1 point Total: 68
  19. DreamSayer

    Heroes After All

    I'd be lying if I said that I wasn't intrigued by your take on the whole Aura Guardians concept. I'm sure there's nothing I can say here that wouldn't have been said a lot better by Negrek, but anyway, let's get to the good things about this. For one, the characters appear to be endearing...
  20. DreamSayer

    Seafaring Travels!

    Review For Chapter One Before I begin this review, I just want to let you know that I've not seen any of your previous works (maybe you could link them individually above?) and as such, I will treat this as though it were a standalone work. With that out of the way, there's not a whole ton...