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  1. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    ~Chapter 47 Extra: Masks~ Lexx tapped his foot against the park bench that he was leaning against, humming a tune while idly scrolling through posts on his phone. Nothing too engaging, and he was only half paying attention to any of it. Maybe the news would be more interesting. The destruction...
  2. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Hot damn uA I'm still in awe of how quickly you chewed through Book 1 and your comments have been an absolute delight. I know I've already said as much in DMs, but I just wanted to say it again. x3 Got some specific replies for Sike too: That's about what I was aiming for! :D A sense that we...
  3. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    *Glances at timestamp on last review.* Ripperoni. Act III Honestly the world seems like it'd be pretty dang perfect without all the orb fighting. :V Just chuck the orbs into the sun and everything will be fine. Really powerful stuff here. I just generally enjoyed the way you portrayed DM's...
  4. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Lexx walked into the office to find papers completely covering every inch of furniture. Sebastian paced back and forth behind his desk, muttering to himself, occasionally flipping through one of the many books that sat propped open on the shelves, which he hadn’t put away in case he needed them...
  5. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Fair warning, this one is 12k words. It's worth it, trust me. ~Chapter 47: Sebastian Shepard~ It had been two days since the world came apart. A boy wandered through the wreckage alone. Each step was slow and arduous. His feet caught on chunks of concrete and charred wood as they made the...
  6. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    All I can say is that I'm thrilled that you enjoyed him so much! Stalker is actually my favorite character in the fic, but I've never been able to tell people why. I'm sure you'll be pleased to hear that Chapter 47, which is the longest chapter in the fic so far, is entirely from his point of...
  7. Chibi Pika

    Fledglings

    Special: The Deepest Wounds Hooo boy, I had my suspicion when we opened with a Growlithe, but... sad Elty time? Sad Elty time. But the really interesting thing here is... I had had no clue he used to be a feral! Now, whether that's because it hadn't been revealed, or I just forgot, I can't...
  8. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    OH. I didn't realize, because the bit that you quoted was supposed to look distorted, but not totally obscured. That's interesting! I went to a lot of effort to make sure it would show up right across all the websites I post on, but I didn't even think about potential browser issues. What...
  9. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    I've been waiting a long, long time for this one. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do. ~Chapter 46: Meeting with the Commander~ The aftermath passed by in a blur of sights and sounds that didn’t fully register in my head. I saw Groudon and Kyogre slowly making their way back to the cave...
  10. Chibi Pika

    Fledglings

    Chapter 61: Oh wow, I'd forgotten that this was literally Pleo's first time seeing Ander since way back then! He's missed out on seeing a lot of character development. Oh! I was thinking they'd be left behind here at the capitol, but if they'll be giving chase, maybe there'll be a chance for...
  11. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    The grand finale of the Hoenn arc is here at last! One way or another, the fight ends here. ~CHAPTER 45: DELUGE AND DESOLATION~ We shot through skies torn with fire and lightning, ducking and weaving past blades of wind as meteors rained down all around us. Swift nimbly dodged every...
  12. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    I'm really glad you enjoy Lexx so much. Honestly, it's helped me remember to give him plenty of fun moments in this arc. Aha, well, Lugia wouldn't hear every word of her inner monologue, just the stuff directed at it. That said, it definitely felt her skepticism and was annoyed by it. :P No...
  13. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    ~Chapter 44: Messenger from the Heavens~ Everyone was frozen on the spot, staring in awe as the serpent spiraled downward. No one dared to speak. No one dared to breathe. It was like the entire earth had gone still, all eyes watching the emerald ribbon twisting gracefully through the air...
  14. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    ...So like, did I mention that the Eon Manifesto was holding me back from reviewing the rest of the fic, lol. Chapter 65: God, the contrast in seeing how Amia regards Owen vs how we just saw Eon regarding Owen is stark. This is what love looks like. Respecting them. Valuing their opinion...
  15. Chibi Pika

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    It’s here. The moment you’ve all (not) been waiting for. THE GREAT EON HATE MANIFESTO I am somewhat ashamed to admit that I’ve been putting this off for awhile. There was just so much I wanted to say, and I was worried that I wasn’t going to say it correctly! But I've had more than enough...
  16. Chibi Pika

    Fledglings

    Chapter 60 Hoo boy, it's all coming together now. For the first time, springing Pleo out is actually starting to look feasible! (At least, a lot more feasible than the "win the tournament" plan.) I like this attention to detail. As someone who pays way too much attention to keeping track of...
  17. Chibi Pika

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    ~Chapter 43: Dance of the Ancients~ I stared numbly at the silhouettes of the Rocket airships as they disappeared over the horizon. They’d gotten the orb, and we’d all just sat there and watched it happen, and it wasn’t like we should’ve said ‘screw the hostages,’ but there should have been...
  18. Chibi Pika

    Heroes After All

    Chapter 7: Some really great, believable kid behavior here. :p I really like the tension you got out of slowly ruminating over this moment. A good instance where slowing things down really added something. This is a really great way to mask the fact that you hadn't come up with the name...
  19. Chibi Pika

    Greenhorn Prometheus

    Welp, it’s been a long time coming, but I’m finally here to check this out! (And I say a long time for anyone else reading this because not only was Halloween several months ago, but also, I was one of the ones who knew about this project during its inception!) Just a quick disclaimer: I have...
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