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    PS: I finally discovered how to register on my site, you just have to go to Members and then...

    PS: I finally discovered how to register on my site, you just have to go to Members and then click on the +Join Site button. If you're already a member and want to log in you have to do the same but once you clicked on the +Join Site button and go to the page to register then above the thingie...
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    It was no big deal ;) (no worries, I'm nearly never on-line anymore so I should be the one...

    It was no big deal ;) (no worries, I'm nearly never on-line anymore so I should be the one excusing myself) Of well, lately there've been lots of ups and downs: I got my first boyfriend but one of my friends is also in love with him and tries to steal him from me (on his b-day I wanted to go...
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    You're welcome =D Hehe, I'm still 14 V.V; Will be turning 15 (finally!!!!) in October xP With...

    You're welcome =D Hehe, I'm still 14 V.V; Will be turning 15 (finally!!!!) in October xP With Halloween as I like to say it xD Hahaha, I don't have such a good brain neither xD I keep forgetting everything ^u^; I hope you're doing alright and I hope to see you soon =) PS: I won't be online...
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    Hey there Solar, it's been a long time. How is everything there? I hope you're fine ^^ Anyways...

    Hey there Solar, it's been a long time. How is everything there? I hope you're fine ^^ Anyways, I just discovered that tomorrow is your birthday. I probably won't be able to come on-line tomorrow so I'm saying it now. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! I hope you'll have fun. You're going to be 17 right? xD...
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    Oh, my fault ^^; When I read the rules here at serebii however I saw a rule about something like...

    Oh, my fault ^^; When I read the rules here at serebii however I saw a rule about something like that if a month had passed without replies that the thread would die or something like that. Maybe it was indeed, as you said, only for a few forums (that also explains why I didn't get any...
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    Mysterious Stranger (Advance, Contest)

    Sorry for not reviewing before, I was very busy with school. Anyway, I liked this chapter and the part where Harley said that about his "beautiful" hair freezing there came tears out of my eyes from laughing so hard XD Anyway, the grammar is better in this one although still the same mistakes...
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    Hey Genkiness, I've readed your fanfic Heartbroken Again and Again and I really liked it, it's...

    Hey Genkiness, I've readed your fanfic Heartbroken Again and Again and I really liked it, it's very cute and I love the shippyness and humour you put in it (really, you don't want to know how my parents were looking at me for laughing this much ^^; ). I read the entire fanfic in exactly two and...
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    Mysterious Stranger (Advance, Contest)

    I like the story so far, I think it was a good idea to make Ash lose his memory, I'm still a bit confused about what exactly happened to him but I'm sure I'll find out soon ^^ I only have one question: Where's Pikachu? I haven't seen him yet. Anyway, you have a lot of grammar mistakes and you...
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    Pokémon: The Retelling

    I also appreciate criticism but sometimes critiques sound very mean and they make me feel bad (this happens with critiques on my own stories as well as stories of others, and those two people on the other page really made me feel bad because I thought they were mean and to hard, it's your story...
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    I'm glad you aren't offended ^^ For your first fanfic it was very good you know, especially the...

    I'm glad you aren't offended ^^ For your first fanfic it was very good you know, especially the dialogue was good, the scenery and emotions need a lot of work but the dialogue was great, I'm sure you'll become a great writer ^^ That's fine, practicing makes perfect right ^^ Hahaha, I myself...
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    Hey Syushuu, How are you? I just read your story of Contestshipping-The Beginning of the...

    Hey Syushuu, How are you? I just read your story of Contestshipping-The Beginning of the Johto Grand Festival! I think it was very good, I really liked it. Could you maybe open a new thread where you continue the story please, I would love being able to continue reading it, and I'm sure a lot...
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    Heyyy! I'm new here!

    Hey gardenofixia, welcome to serebii, I hope you enjoy your time here and make lots of friends, the people are very nice here so I'm sure you will ^^ For getting you started I'll add you as a friend. Feel free to ask if you need any help ^^
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    Hey rawr?! How've you been? I hope my critique on your story didn't offend you, it's very good...

    Hey rawr?! How've you been? I hope my critique on your story didn't offend you, it's very good for a first attempt, believe me, it only needs a bit of more effort and description, apart from that it's very good. If you need help, I'll help you for sure so don't doubt asking me ^^ And don't...
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    A New Adventure

    Rather good but it still has a lot of mistakes. You described some colours and such but apart of that you didn't follow a lot of kindrindra's advice. You didn't describe the environment like he told you to and once again Georgie and Cait didn't think about which starter pokémon they wanted...
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    Pokémon: The Retelling

    You're welcome ^^ I really don't get why those two people on the other page (lost their names ^^; ) have so many critique on your story, it's very good. And as you already said, it's a retelling, not a novelization, you can change the things as much as you want yourself from the real story as...
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    Pokémon: The Retelling

    Kyaaaa!!! I really love this story so far, you describe the scenes so well, I really can see it happening while reading it ^^ Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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    haha (it's actually spelled neighbours but it doesn't really matters, it's a difficult word)...

    haha (it's actually spelled neighbours but it doesn't really matters, it's a difficult word) Well actually not, I only share internet with my lil bro and my parents and I think that's the cause because for example if I'm the only one of the family on the internet (which nearly never happens)...
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    lol (at the moment I'm on my brothers computer because on my computer the internet won't work ^^;)

    lol (at the moment I'm on my brothers computer because on my computer the internet won't work ^^;)
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    =) haha, computers can be very nasty XD

    =) haha, computers can be very nasty XD
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    I'll maybe continue (since I was already working on the next chapter) but it won't be in the...

    I'll maybe continue (since I was already working on the next chapter) but it won't be in the forums, I'll PM everybody who asked for it the next chapters but they won't be very long and they may take weeks since my computer just hates me (lol) and won't let me work on my stories.
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