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    u know why my group got deleted

    u know why my group got deleted
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    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon--Gemstone (PG 13)

    I agree with everyone about the thrid member and I know im a bit behind I been away for a few days and I agree with everyone about who the courier was, anyway cant wait for the next chapter
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    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon--Gemstone (PG 13)

    great chapter sweetpiplup123, team gemstars mission was good but in my opinion i would've thought team gemstar would've taken on an E mission instead of a D but it really doesn't matter you explained the fights quite well and the end part where the guy was stealing something was good, and i see...
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    Annihilation: Ruins of the World [PG-13]

    This part made me laugh hard it was really funny, all together a really good story but sometimes it is hard to understand espcially at the sabrina part took me some time to get it but over all very well 9.5/10 nearly perfect just a few problems.
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    The Travels Of The New World

    Chapter 2 Gotta get out of here, ummm, that way. Thought a injured Riolu as he ran through city backstreets and climbing up fire escapes. A Riolu is about 1 and a half feet tall it is blue and black and has two flaps coming of the side of his head. This Riolu wasn't ordinary it was...
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    go on to my page and find the group tokyo underground and join then say i invited you to it ok jack

    go on to my page and find the group tokyo underground and join then say i invited you to it ok jack
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    Only A Dream

    that was great we finnaly have got to the travelling and it is good so far. We ahve got all the background stuff done know and we are onto the main journey which is great, there is really not a lot to report on I didn't find many things wrong so really good
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    Only A Dream

    Oh god oh god oh god i love your story it is brilliant all the stuff about Dawn being taken into a secret world by Arceus and finding Ash there and i gotta say you have a great way of keeping thr readers wanting more. I mean you've had a jampacked first four chapters but have managed to keep so...
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    Max's Hoenn Journey

    Good on you harryheart stand your ground and manaphyman I get what you're saying and I wouldn't say that you're completely wrong but you don't need to go full on "I'm not reviewing this fic anymore" you could just say all things you didn't like and things that could be improved as most writers...
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    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon--Gemstone (PG 13)

    Great chapter and I think it's great that emily might have a secret and team CBE's name is greta that its Cute But Evil and that other one Courageuos and the other two(Cant remeber). Can't wait to find out what mission Team gemstar get first and what part Team Eclipse will play in the story.
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    The Travels Of The New World

    chapter 1 Here we go chapter 1 the first chapter woo Chapter 1 Turtwig looked around to find a piece of paper lying on the floor, Turtwig shoved the peice of paper into such a position he could read it, and this was written on the paper: People Who Are Lost...
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    Max's Hoenn Journey

    harryheart great story it looks like it will get better and better cna't wait for the next chapter
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    The Travels Of The New World

    The Travels Of The New World PG-13 Hello everyone who bothers to read this story. I would just like to inform you that this is my first PROPER Fan-Fic (I did start an old one but I lost all of my drafts and gave up). I use a wordpad software and run my work through a spell check sit, it's...
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    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon--Gemstone (PG 13)

    love your story it is great and i have seen a few mistakes but i really dont care i just want the stroy line, and i really cant take the mick i'm only 12 and i'm not brilliant at writing, can't wait for chapter five. You've given me a great idea for a story and again love your story and can't...
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    To Love or To Hate? (PG-13)

    god this is beginning to get good please post chapter foour i cant wait, oh my god i cant believe i just said that im turning into a really suck up fan but i really want the fourth chapter
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    hi jack i finally found you well i hope this is you

    hi jack i finally found you well i hope this is you
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    thanks for the friend request

    thanks for the friend request
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    My life is very fine, how about you?

    My life is very fine, how about you?
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    My Pokemon story

    chapter 2 sorry if anyone ever reads this its just im really bad at all the fancy push this chapter butto and here is chapter two so lets just get straight to the point here is chapter 2 Chapter 2 I finally took time to notice many of my surroundings and Rain once we stopped. Rain was...
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    My Pokemon story

    Well this is about a boy who goes on his pokemon journey the usaul stuff but with twists placed in. Anyway hope you enjoy oh by the way some times this may count as pg 13 only sometimes though. Chapter 1 It was a grave night when I lost my Eevee. It was so dark, clouds were looming...
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