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    Proving Grounds

    Two chapters? Someone's kicking it into high gear... :D So, Echo evolves and shows a more prominent prankster nature. Derak meets his mother, and we learn of Garth's back story. Two questions, though: if the water pretty much causes hyper accelerated aging, why would Nobunaga want it? And how...
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    The Corei Quest...rewritten!

    A review? What the heck have I been doing?! @Colton S: Thanks so much for the compliments! Reading the review has put new wind in my sail to keep on writing! P.S. you're on the list! Just got over a bad case of the flu (if that's any excuse), and as a potential contest deadline is around the...
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    Alpha and Omega: A Hoenn One-Shot Contest

    Consider my interest piqued! I will need a short plot, but I do need to flex my imagination some more! :D L@er!
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    The Corei Quest...rewritten!

    I'm not dead! I'm not dead! Seriously... I need to stop spending half a year updating this thing... especially after seeing what I can do when I put my mind to it. Need to put in a P.S. to my last post before we hit the disclaimers... Attack on Titan, hunh? Well, you're forgiven. I know...
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    The Corei Quest...rewritten!

    Hey all! Happy New Year! Here's to all the chapters to come! Now, before we go further, time for some appreciation! @Shadow Lucario Maybe, but morals... not so much. On the chapter length... I'm working on shorter chapters for the moment to garner more readers. Guess it's working. But then...
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    The Pledge PG-15 (One-shot)

    Well, it took... 'a while'... but here we are. Before I go on, thanks for the birthday present. And in summary... that hurt. A lot. Having to leave your family behind to join a radical group. Give your all for said team, and do so in style. Cut loose because you want to see said family again...
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    The Corei Quest...rewritten!

    TCQ Chapter 47 Yes, another five month wait, I really, really need to pick my butt up off the ground a lot earlier. Sigh... Before we get to the meat, I think we need to acknowledge a reviewer: Evil Lord Maybe she will, maybe she won't... this chapter may tell... The wait is...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    I never knew there were so many ways to describe getting punched in the face... :P So, Cheren realized you don't exactly play with Plasma and get away with it (and he's meant to be smart...), Bianca gets dragged into it (shocker), and speaking of "shocker", Zebstrika's expression to Colress's...
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    Randoh Region: Creating a Legacy

    OK, I can't remember all six areas I hit when writing a review (scratch that, just remembered the sixth), but to make up for that, I'll hit both chapters at once. GRAMMAR Eighteen. Twenty-five. Thirty. When numbers are used in writing (other than when they are read out or seen by...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Wait... Cheren invited N to watch the Pokemon battle? That he hates Pokemon battles? Knowing he'd step in like that? Just how did Cheren meet him anyways? And what does he want to prove here? The questions just compound, don't they? And poor Bianca is still out of sight. Does anyone (other...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Well, that was an interesting adventure of a chapter. So, Dalton's pretty much gotten Phineas off his back for now, Talia's returned, and Cheren's come-a-knocking for a battle. Not to mention Cheren's concerned about his little "Bee-Bee"... *smirk* Interesting. There was an error somewhere...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Ooo... Phineas is in trouble... :P Dullsville grammar lecture first... Aside from making a fan's dictionary his new best friend, the comma (heck, everything boldened) is redundant, given the meaning of 'curmudgeon'. Not a grammar flaw, but the words in bold could do with single quotation...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Interesting battle. Jaco's approach to battle is interesting... Lake evolving too is an interesting (albeit expected) twist too. And three become five. Lucky Phineas. :P Interesting choice of word... I'd have used heard, but it must have been a new one even for Dalton... :P Mordecai's group's...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Zounds... a grammar/homonym slip? When was the last time that was caught?! Also: Needed a couple of commas. Unless you being suspenseful on purpose, Fluff can't be dead, can he? Now I see how Phineas sort of recognized Estelle, and why she was being so secretive about her identity until now...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    That's a good question, Marlow... what could Colress be talking about? And dang, is Ghetsis cold... decapitation for dropping a flag? I know the US (and many other constitutions) forbid the national flag to touch the ground, but decapitation is a bit... yeah. Dalton has chats with both Talia...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Hmm... so Blake has no idea who Estelle is either... the subplot thickens. :P And it's nice to see Dalton and Thalia reach an... understanding in their relationship. Dalton needs support, Thalia flips the bird. Everybody laughs. Adding Assad to this mix could prove for quite the chemical...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Speaking of Blake's trick, I'm surprised Cheren of all people fell for it. He was watching it the first time. Guess Blake isn't as big a douche as he is a total... oh, what was that word? Crud, I forget. As long as you keep away from his sister and his dream of being Pokemon Champ, I guess...
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    Pokémon Revolution

    Auburn, 'afraid' to take a risk? There's definitely a story here... *gleefully waits on tenterhooks* His sights Roasted alive in a sealed-off metal dome... Yeah, I'd say so too. Peeked Other than the brief rash of homonym attacks, this was a pretty awesome chapter. Garnet and his Ditto...
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    Pokémon Revolution

    Finally I review! Well, then… best get this review posted stat, then… ;) Just note that I'm not a huge fan of Pokemon Conquest. not that I don't find it interesting now. Hmm… I dunno. “Powerful” and “strong” are two adjectives that sound awfully similar in meaning to me. At least to use them...
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    The Age of Harmony (12+)

    Aww... he woke up? Boo, rating... :P Interesting fantasies aside, that wasn't exactly the best way to wake up. No wonder Dalton's so anti-social... I know it's not fun to watch the socially-awkward fumble and stumble after reading Assad's needling (wonder what he and Looker want with Dalton and...
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