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@NebulaDreams Good luck to you mate! Sorry for extremely late response, my activity here dropped drastically (and with it I temporarily stopped reading fics, except for MMM which I promised to do) - due to a lot of pressure IRL. I just thought I should comment on your posts before I am back full...

MMM prize review is here! TA-DA! [Error: File CRICKETS_CHIRPING.MP3 not found.] Seriously, apologies for taking so long to get to this. RL stuff and all that :/ So, I have read Prologue and Chapter 1 (I always choose them because reading a random chapter in a long runner seems pointless to me...

Hiya! MMM prize review, coming up! Sorry for taking so long too. I was supposed to read your story earlier this week, but my job is brutal lately to the point I barely have energy to turn on my desktop after coming back home. Anyways, before I begin - my usual disclaimer: I have only read...

Thank you for your review @Chibi Pika ! Sorry for late response. RL being very stressful and busy lately doesn't help with my activity here. Actually his first thoughts are indeed about the disapperance, but he concludes quickly nothing seems out of order. Since he has no way to figure out...

Hello! I am here with your MMM prize. I've read Prologue and Ch1 and it is time for a review. My usual disclaimer when I am reviewing first chapters as opposed to entire act/arc or the whole fic: Please take it with a pinch of salt. Obviously your story is just beginning so a lot of my points...

Hi! I am here for a Ch1 review as a part of MMM prize. Thanks for participating btw.! As usual with reviews that comment on the beginning of your story and not the whole of it, please take this with a pinch of salt. Some of my opinions will be pure guesswork and assumption because of how little...

Right! Finished Act 4! I am going to have fewer comments this time around, mostly because it felt like a breeze compared to Act 3. Btw. You mentioned your intention to redesign the story with Act 4 being the end and Act 5 being reworked into a sequel. I didn't start Ch27 yet so feel free to...

Thank you for your review @Namohysip ! I was hoping you would be back for the rest of it. OK, I will rewrite the sentence(s). Thanks! It couldn't be more obvious right? I made the first layer blatant like this to make the readers drop their guard and assume the culprit will be whomever said...

Cats and dogs have been indeed recycled a lot... a horse not so much, so I doubt it but it would be definitely cool. Growlithe was born to exist as a stage 1 for Arcanine (who was meant to be a legendary, but they realized it didn't match with two bird legendaries, so they created Moltres...

Oh wait... Kaldeo. Oops. Looks like the only way would be grass horse starter.

Yeah, but I also meant the typing. Not only would they be similar, they would be also both fire. That is why I don't think we will ever see another fire horse. However, they could make it other element (after all we did get donkey inspired ground type in gen7 right? And we also have different...

Gotcha. I bet most people are excited abour starters for the same reason. That's fine. Don't balme you about Kanto starters. (Ironically I am Charizard fan still after so many years...)

Have you ever asked yourself why, tho? Exactly! You just said it yourself: See how unimportant they are to everything? Nothing changes if I never use them. They are like sugar in a cup of coffee - completely optional. As I said tho, it is a minor thing to me all things considered. We all know...

So, chapter 10! Basically the whole point is to give Curio reason to leave the island (as she probably will in the next chapter) while meeting both other Pokemon and humans for the first time. Importantly we see that she doesn't see humans as a threat (despite her parents' warning) which will...

Not likely since we already have Ponyta / Rapidash. I wonder myself tho, if the eventual starters might resemble anything from the chinese zodiac...

@Namohysip Thank you for your review! The opening of this story is definitely the weakest part; you are not the first person to criticize it especially in terms of pace. The original opening was even longer and too exposition heavy if you can believe it. Heh, that is because the synopsis was...

Re 1 - Yes that makes sense from GameFreak POV, except they don't need it. They could still slap an image of previous startes and everyone would go "Oh a new Pokemon game." Fans will buy the new game anyway and newcomers are actually more likely to recognize classic Pokemon. Re2 - Um, that is...

Ah! In my head, her "change" was totally natural. Realizing one has been fooled by the very person they were trying to help, feels like a total betrayal. She offered help where others just hated, and Red repaid her unusual rare kindness by accepting comfort when he didn't deserve any. It is like...

Reviewed Vivarium! I would like a review of The Missing One please. It is mystery/whodunit style short story (around 10k words in total) with OC and Lillie. If possible, make your review spoiler-free please (or just use Spoiler tag). Thank you!