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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Gets a bit graphic in this chapter. Chapter 26- Lavender Flames “WAKE UP!”The rocketing noise shot through her ears, Serena bolted up. A Roar met her ears, her eyes found the blinding light of a bolt of lightning. “GET UP” She looked to her side to find Max beside her...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Review replies: Thanks Mayziken... And well sorry for the realy late update. Regigigases and Darkrais, (if that's the correct spelling for their names) their speech shall appear normal for this chapter. ---- Chapter 25- The Colour of blood If you looked hard...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 Review Replies: Thanks guys. I'm still trying to get the grammar and spellings sorted, so I've hopefully progressed in those departments. But I'll stop holding you up. Next bit [points down] ---- Chapter 24- The...
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    The Mentor (Pearl and Advanceshipping) PG-13

    Well seeing as you kindly reviewed my previous chapters. I'll return the favour. Or at least I think it was you and not the other one ??? For a first chapter you have goten many of the basics done fairly nicely. Discriptions were done well, as well as the way in which things went in the...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    “May?” Ash asked, whilst she continued to hold him at the side, recalling the last instance something like this had happened; not too long ago. Although previously he wasn’t as far as a fatality. “Ash?” she said in return, carrying a calm voice. “You can let go now. I’m fine” he said...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 ---- Chapter 23- Arrogance isn’t Wisdom There it was. Ash and May gradually began to lose a sense of their surroundings, due to the great expanse of time that they had lingered in the dark forest. They stopped...
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    Sorry

    You're leaving. 0.0 Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I'm definate that there's a bunch of people who really enjoy this fic, and all of your others, as I have. But I guess you probably won't be back here to read this... I'm sure that there's a load of others who also want you to continue here...
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    Fifteen(AaMayL)

    Since what you said on the forums, I decided to leave a review here for you. It was a nicely done one- shot. There was good flow throughout and the whole surprise. Nice touch. I'm not used to lighthearted fics, but it didn't really matter. Ash venting his anger was also a nice original...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    ...continued “What’s up?” ‘He Will pay. NOW’ it screamed inside of its mind. ‘Revenge Is My Right’ “No good” he replied simply, as Dawn completely understood what he was talking about. “GUYS!” Simon called to his Pokémon in great alarm, as a large spike grew out of the ground in a...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 Simon (OC) - 15 Robert (OC) - 18 In retrospect I haven’t really done much justice to Drew, Brandon and Paul as characters, more so Drew than Paul or Brandon. But eventually in the story I’ll build up their...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 Simon (OC) - 15 Robert (OC) - 18 Layout for the Pokemon speech has changed “Translated Pokémon talk is now in speech marks and in bold otherwise if it isn’t in bold it is not translated” And now...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 Simon (OC)- 15 Robert (OC)- 18 Two new OC’s coming your way, Chapter 20- Honour among Thieves Two men stood waiting at the town centre of Lavender. “You think he’ll deliver the goods?” one...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Ash-17 Max- 13 May- 15 Dawn- 13 Serena – 10 Well I'm back here. You may be asking why? But basically I'm in a simalar situation to that of Matkins. The lack of reviews has been Reallly disheartning. But after seeing that this fic was actually nominated...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Well, when one is possesed he would find a way to get... un possesed. and with it bieing Brandon, he knew all of this anchient stuff, and worked out the only remaining way to free himself. unfortunately he didn't know all of the facts. and the other brains, unlike him are in a static place...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    Guardian Solaris Ages: Brandon- ?? This chapter for once contains absolutely no Ash, or May, or anyone else in the group inside of it. Review Replies: well sorry for not updating immediately after the second review, I had completely given up hope of posting another chapter here...
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    Reunion(Advanceshipping-PG13)

    well that was a short chapter, really short. In fact just about nothing really happened there, apart for that bit at the end I'd expect Geovanni to say different words, i.e. not giving away a lot of information, ornot putting them down, he seems to busy to do that. Like ---- "Listen...
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    Advanceshipping General Discussion

    Then again consider how long the scene was in the entire movie, not exactly one eight of it? But the fact that they mentioned the scene at all is something big. The scene had absolutely nothing to do with the storyline, apart for the bonding beetween May and Manaphy. Then again Ash wouldn't have...
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    Pokemon: Neo Genesis (AaMayL/Advanceshipping, PG-13)

    Did you just put two different fics together? Neo Genisis, and Your holiday one- shots. I will 'just' leave a review for your last chap of Neo Genisis. and I will be completely honest with you here. Altair is like some sort of super trainer, which I personally get tired of seeing in fanfics...
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    Gaurdian Solaris (Advanceshipping)

    I've updated the first chapter, and the next chapter is ready to be posted (already done on ff.net). If I do not get at least two reviews here, it won't be put up.
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    Reunion(Advanceshipping-PG13)

    Never knew there was such a thing? other than that, there was not much in the shipping department here. I'm not complaining, considering my own fic. Just saying, that you could have expanded on that one moment, to maximise the shippiness of it.
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