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  1. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Chapter 33 Really enjoyed the tournament content this chapter. I love the takes on competitive battling in LC, and I really felt hype for the events as if I were a convention attendee myself. I couldn't help but think of Worlds in real life. Pokémon really lets me care about sports by way of...
  2. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Ch30 Gorgeous art!! Always gorgeous art, but damn. So, this is the end of Book 1!! I really did demolish it, as you say. If anything, I'm gonna get faster now. Jade is a real trainer! What a journey, from failing her exam to having a big team of evolved and powerful pokémon and travelling far...
  3. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    It's TIME to review Ch29! Fantastic art, as always. Really like this one. "Someone's charizard" is pretty rough. She's not thinking of him as Firestorm right now, huh. She got whumped HARD. Damn. Really enjoying the consequent pain and hardship. Chibi was LYING, he DID care!! I am tearing up at...
  4. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    What a long ****ing read ch28 was! Really enjoyed it. Here goes. Lugia time! Problems on purpose! The chapter art is especially gorgeous, and I'm very excited for the famed large horrible superpowered goose creature and all the terrible decisions they're gonna make! Holy **** this is one hell...
  5. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Here we go, with ch27! I had a feeling Stalker was still an active Rocket member and this explains why there's such a rift between the forces, I guess! I fiure I was supposed to believe he was a defector, but I always assumed he was still very much integrated and that his goal was specifically...
  6. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    ch26, I'm on a roll~ Love how unimpressed and uncomfortable Feraligatr is in the header art. The pokémon don't like this! For the most part, anyway. I like that, it's a good way to layer on the difficulty of the new arrangement without having Jade and Starr lay into each other. Bless Raichu for...
  7. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    So I went right ahead and read ch25 because of course I did. First off, I adore the chapter art. I keep looking at it. Starr's face, with flowing tears but a grit-teeth wide-eyed stare of horror. Her hands, are they reaching out, or coming up to defend herself? Her executive outfit, and how it...
  8. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Ugh, finally got around to reading ch24! Gonna avoid cluttering my reading list until I'm caught up with LC, I think. Right, here goes: The dialogue about the Starr reveal is just slightly off, somehow. I think it's the incredibly direct way Jade drops the info, since Ajia's reaction tracks...
  9. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    I have a little less to say about Chapter 11, seeing as it's a less intense chapter than most. I think chapters like this are important! Downtime matters, transitional periods of time are key for context and to take a breath. It was nice to see a trio of mid-stage kanto starters cooperating in...
  10. unrepentantAuthor

    Salvage

    Hi there, here's my review for chapter 2. Sorry for the delay — both in the sense that you were expecting this yesterday, and in that it's been literally a couple years since I read chapter one. I glanced at chapter one for a quick refresher, but being pressed for time I moved straight on...
  11. unrepentantAuthor

    Different Eyes

    Author's Note: Thanks for bearing with me while I got the next two updates ready. Now the story proper can begin, and hopefully continue at a faster rate. If you’re an older reader, this is a different opening chapter than you remember. If you were a reader way back in 2012, it’ll be more...
  12. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Quituple review, **********er. Review policy at present is to make note of any scenes that leave a particular impression and comment on those. Chapter 6 Honestly Jade has such dumbass energy half the time. Getting all the way to the end of the queue before realising you don't have ID or...
  13. unrepentantAuthor

    The Legendarian Chronicles [Revision 11]

    Hi Chibi! I actually read chapters 5 and 5.5 a few weeks ago, but I got sidetracked before I could read on or review. Gonna drop my review now before the memory of them stops being fresh. Wow! I think this was the first actual breather we've had since the opening. We needed it. Wonderful art as...
  14. unrepentantAuthor

    Different Eyes

    It's Different Eyes' second anniversary! I know it's been a long time since the last proper update, but don't worry. I've been working hard this year, and I have quite a buffer of material stored up. It's just in need of some polishing before I upload it. To begin with, I replaced the original...
  15. unrepentantAuthor

    Different Eyes

    Many thanks to my regular readers for their patience with me and my irregular, often glacial update pace. Starting on Jan 1st 2020, I've been writing a minimum of 50 words daily, often substantially more, with the intention of resuming a regular update schedule beginning the 17th April 2020. On...
  16. unrepentantAuthor

    Dispatch Deferred [One-shot, Everyone, PMD]

    Thank you for this lovely review, Nebby! I'd given up getting a response for Dispatch here. I like that you've pointed out bits you liked and made suggestions for improvement - both always go appreciated. Some responses: Agreed. Wrong word/punctuation choice, there. Nah, she's just grumpy. :3...
  17. unrepentantAuthor

    Dispatch Deferred [One-shot, Everyone, PMD]

    Hi there, this is my cute short story originally written for the Bulbagarden Summer 2019 Oneshot comp about an expedited same-century amazon delivery, I hope you'll enjoy reading it. Content: homebrew PMD setting, multiple OC viewpoints, 6,200 words. Extremely mild swearing, light fantasy...
  18. unrepentantAuthor

    Different Eyes

    I have replied to Canisaries' kind review off-site. Sorry for the wait to anyone following this! I haven't posted much on Serebii for a while partly because I took up a job at a software startup for several months that had me working late and skipping breaks all while making giant commutes. It...
  19. unrepentantAuthor

    Writing Resolutions

    Write daily, even if it's just the little daily prompts, non-fiction or otherwise, in the cute little handbook I got for xmas. Post some DE content monthly again. That's probably enough to be getting on with, honestly! But if I can manage, I'd also like to read/review/post here more, and to do...
  20. unrepentantAuthor

    The Review Game

    Here's my review of GL, as promised. I didn't realise I'd been beaten to the punch, but I'm still proud to have left a fairly chunky review.
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