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  1. Cutlerine

    Losers [A Ghost Town Side Story]

    Hey, thanks both for your responses: I really appreciate it. I love that you enjoyed this, and I think your critiques are fair and valid; I've gone back to try and make some of the things I wanted to do with this story clearer as a result. This is a little less of a response than normal, for...
  2. Cutlerine

    [T] Land of the Roses

    Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this! Man, between there being fewer threads displayed per page and more activity than before, fics keep vanishing off the front page before I've realised they even updated. Glad I thought to check on this one, or I'd have missed quite an interesting...
  3. Cutlerine

    Seasoned (2018 gift exchange one-shot)

    This is really sweet. I like these kind of … how would you say it, I guess characters who are kind of grouchy and flawed and easy to dislike but who worm their way into your affections anyway. It's a type of character you do really well, I think, and Keahi is a great example; it's so clear that...
  4. Cutlerine

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Guiding Light [COMPLETE]

    Well, Jangmo-o and Sneasel have come back, which is … like not something I was expecting, given that they were fairly transparently just minor threshold guardians beforehand. But here they are! And Jangmo-o at least has come back as an actual character, which is a surprise. Like one with a...
  5. Cutlerine

    The Child of Thorns - A Platinum story.

    I let this one get away from me a bit, huh. D: Well, let's use some of this holiday time to catch up. Chapter 17 is a bit of a slow one, and it doesn't tell us too much that we didn't already know, but it's fun to have all three of our sometime POV characters in one place, and Barry's a good...
  6. Cutlerine

    Losers [A Ghost Town Side Story]

    Eventually, it's over. Cindy tells me to go, that she'll clean up tonight, and though I try to argue with her for a little while, I'm far too tired not to do as she says. “Go on,” she says, squeezing my hand. “Go home and sleep, okay? You don't look well.” Sometimes I feel the four years...
  7. Cutlerine

    Losers [A Ghost Town Side Story]

    This holiday season, I bring you the greatest gift of all: the single gayest thing I've ever written. It's not ambitious, or even very good, honestly, but it is at least that. Anyway, it's a side story/prequel thing for Ghost Town, in which we go back in time twelve years to check in with Sam...
  8. Cutlerine

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Guiding Light [COMPLETE]

    Well, I said I'd catch up, and it's taken several train rides and lunch breaks, but I have finally done it! And there's a whole bunch of interesting stuff to cover, huh. I definitely remember you mentioning something about the abandoned power plant thing a few weeks (possibly months? what even...
  9. Cutlerine

    The Child of Thorns - A Platinum story.

    Interestingly, it looks like we've got a Metchi chapter this time around – and that means, finally, a bunch of answers to the ever-increasing number of questions! Chief among which is the revelation of the mysterious voice's identity. I have to admit, I was thinking about powerful Sinnish...
  10. Cutlerine

    Death of a Sapphire (ten-year anniversary retcon rewrite of The Sapphire Story)

    It's nice to finally see this after hearing you talk about it! And it seems it was worth the wait: I like this glimpse of a could-have-been, in this particular version of Hoenn. You can definitely see its chapterfic origins; there's a broader world here that just barely fits into the one-shot...
  11. Cutlerine

    The Completed Fics Catalog

    The Intangibles, by Cutlerine Two months ago, Morty Fletcher ran away from home. He's managed to get by so far, but winter's approaching fast, and now his haunter is sick. But there's a doctor in Goldenrod who might be able to help, and this guy called Eusine who has an annoyingly handsome...
  12. Cutlerine

    The Intangibles [A Ghost Town Side Story]

    Fair enough. Thank you! I know the feeling, and commend your dedication to the joke! I'm glad to provide! I really don't like leaving things unfinished – I only post things that I know are going to be completed, for instance; if I've got to the stage where I'm posting a thing, it's because I...
  13. Cutlerine

    All Suns Must Set [Chapter 1]

    It's cool to see more work from you! And this is an interesting one, huh. There are lots of seeds planted here that I can see developing in different directions: Shams' burgeoning teenage arrogance (which I sense is covering a deeper insecurity, and going by the numerous hints you drop, I have...
  14. Cutlerine

    Andromeda's Lament

    I'm with Dramatic Melody here: this would make a good introduction, but it definitely reads like there's a lot more to be said. Like, a bunch of stories begin here – Ann and her team's attempts to deal with what happened to Quincey, some form of story involving Ann and Jonathan, Jonathan's...
  15. Cutlerine

    Birth of a Trainer

    This is an interesting one! I have to admit, this kind of story usually isn't really my thing – most of the time, I'm not that interested in this sort of self-consciously dark setting and story – but I can't deny, I quite like this cool cobbled-together post-apocalyptic world. The pokémon...
  16. Cutlerine

    The Intangibles [A Ghost Town Side Story]

    Yeah, not everything needs to be a great big ambitious statement story; sometimes you just write something for fun, something where you know our hero has some problems and that by the end he's going to start sorting them out. This was one of those things. So you know, it's not like great, but...
  17. Cutlerine

    The Child of Thorns - A Platinum story.

    This is an interesting one! I'm surprised Sarah caved and let them join her on the dangerous mission as easily as that; she seems much too aggressively sensible to do something like that. I guess she has a weakness for that particular kind of emotional appeal, and that Inyssa and Barry were able...
  18. Cutlerine

    Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Guiding Light [COMPLETE]

    A trip back in time to meet baby Gallian, huh. Like okay, he's still a kid at the time of the story's present, sure, but here he's all hesitant and nervous. You can really see how this could've developed into the anxious fury we know from the main plotline, and it's cool to finally see the...
  19. Cutlerine

    Fan Fiction Recommendations & Reviewers' Leaderboard

    Land of the Roses (two chapters) +2 Running total: 13 Land of the Roses is like ... the chapters are short and mostly pretty chill, it's a great story to just sit down with and take a couple of chapters at a gulp while you have a cup of tea after you get home from work. Does that make sense as...
  20. Cutlerine

    [T] Land of the Roses

    I think I can see why you're not too happy with the Oak of Ages chapter; it feels a little bitty, and the middle part is kind of a transparent excuse to track how the history of Lanark's world has diverged from (or stayed the same as) that of our own. Which, these are fun details (this fic is...
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