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Actually, not quite. It's 'his mom,' because when you're referring to something in the possesive, it's not a proper noun. Otherwise, Mudkip, I would take ALL of PokemonMaster's advice. It's very good, and will help you immensely.

Well, Fu was healthy (hasn't been used since the previous day), which is why he made the challenge. And yes, Satoshi IS clever, but... not. Unlucky to the bitter end as well. I don't think it'll spoil anything if I say he's got to improve quite a bit. And yes, the girl character is pretty...

;088; CHAPTER TEN: The Rocket Gang! Save the Pokemon! Dr. Okido and his granddaughter bent over the computer displaying the data that the three Zukan trainers had collected. Dr. Okido had considered using his spare Fushigidane to gather data on Pokemon in the immediate area, but in the...

I awoke with a start after another nightmare. I'd been having quite a lot of those lately. I brushed my blond hair out of my eyes, where it had settled to keep me asleep despite the rising sun, and sat up, hoping against hope that today would be better than the last few thousand days since my...

Fixed stupidity. Natsume originally called the destinies "inescapable and fatal" and then later on "changeable." The chapter has now been fixed. Natsume now sees that the majority of the destiny is inescapable, and there is a doom present, but she can't tell if the doom is inescapable as well.

Fu- YES. Shigeru will keep Hothead in much the same way. The others- I honestly don't know his team throughout the whole series, so I can't make any promises. I just know about Fu because that's his first, so he'll start becoming more attached.

;025; CHAPTER NINE: The Tokiwa Forest! The Feral Pokemon! A dense fog, more solid than iron itself, had settled over Yamabuki City, the center of Kanto, the crossroads between the other main cities. Many had noticed the fog, many were concerned. But none could penetrate it. What few...

Pretty good chapter. I'm far too lazy to do much spelling/grammar, but one thing did stand out for me. When Oak explains that every trainer gets a Pokedex, he says "foe the information" not "for." Also, I loved the bit about talking to oneself and laws against it.

Actually, static SHOULD have commas around it, because it's... I don't know the full term, but it's like an add-on. The sentence, "That’s Elekid’s special ability in effect," works just fine on its own. Naming the special ability DOES need a comma, as it is not essential to the meaning of the...

It wasn't so much the trainers as the 5,000,000 or so people who disappeared from Tokiwa City, but the effects are pretty much the same. I wanted to explain why Pikachu would be so rare when they're so adorable and you'd think that breeders around the world would have little Pikachu factories...

;019; CHAPTER EIGHT: The Trek North! A Thieving Pokemon! The water rose, the water fell. Though few had seen it who had not participated in it, an exodus of mass proportions had taken place. And Nature, powerful though it was to resist changes and disturbances, found itself shaken. What...

;016; CHAPTER SEVEN: The Showdown of Tokiwa City! A Flaw in the Team! “DAMMIT!” a man swore in the darkness. “Dammit, dammit, dammit!” The room had sunk under a blanket of shadow, only partially illuminated by a set of computer screens, each of which displayed a video feed. Most of them...

I'll answer for him. We can see 13 billion light years of universe as of now. There's probably more we can't see because the light hasn't even REACHED us yet. That's a HUGE number of cubic light years, far bigger than humanity's entire computer collection could simulate on a small scale. In...

;056; CHAPTER SIX: Stop the Rampaging Pokemon! Satoshi and the old man walked through the door happily, having spent the walk back joking and talking about various Pokemon training styles. “And then, you know what that American did?” the old man said, hardly coherent through the...

DarthGroudon: Sheesh, first you want me to wait, now you want more. *wink* I expect a chapter to be up by Saturday your time, certainly. I'm just not happy w/ the draft I have now. Araleon: PM list? Ok... I'll announce it next chapter, but I'll PM you when I put it up. As for Shigeru, if I...

Araleon: Thanks! Satoshi will be different from Ash/Red in several ways, but I can't promise he won't CATCH a Pikachu, but I will promise if he does, it won't be anything like the anime version.

Uh, hello? DiaxPearl! No, just kidding. DiaxBerlitz all the way! Pearl is too annoying.

I highly suspect that there's a LOT of life out there, and a good many species could be intelligent as well. However, we might not recognize it. Let's face it, we humans can't even agree on what's alive on THIS world (I'm looking at you, stupid viruses). I doubt we'll meet anything to have...

Fighting/Flying, I think that's lacking. I mean, come on, there's even GROUND/Flying. Also, more Fire types, I don't care what. Gen IV had only two fire Pokemon families in the dex, which is annoying.

I believe he meant June 6, 2006 (6/6/6), or the purported number of the beast. Personally, I think we're not really safe until everyone born that day has been killed... (nah... they're ok)