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Thanks for the reviews, Fobbie! I'll reply to them over on TR, but as for here, I've got another chapter ready to go~ ~Chapter 53: Storm Clouds~ I took a deep breath. “Okay. I’m ready.” A cool breeze drifted in through the open window. Lugia’s face hung right outside, but no one outside...

Chapter 66 So, after a quick refresher, we left off with Team Traveller trying to make a getaway out of Magmapool with Zygarde's team in tow, after they gave Ketu, Ellsberg and Team Sentinel the slip back in the dungeon with that fake Zygarde gambit. Meanwhile Lyn got into a mess chasing Pleo...

Alrighty, here we go with 120-128: 120 So Manny and Marshadow are like, two halves of the same whole... I suppose that would explain why they're so similar, yes. :p I can't recall how Marshadow reacted when the Kilo folks who knew Manny first showed up and inevitably compared them. Guessing...

[Glances at date of last review] Hmm... hmm... yes I see... let's all ignore that. SE8 Really funny to see Star as just this regular legend caught by humans, after all the world-scale god-tier crises. But I suppose it fits with the whole "gods are weaker in physical form" thing. Even weirder...

And now for another extra, because I just couldn't leave Starr alone for long~ ~Chapter 52 Extra: Burn Away~ The sun had barely set, leaving the surrounding wilds lit with the reddish glow of twilight. Starr wandered through the forest with no real goal or destination in mind. Not like there...

Told ya 52 wouldn't take as long~ ~Chapter 52: The Heart of a Guardian~ I stood alone in a field outside Viridian, and I couldn’t remember how I’d gotten there. The grass was bathed in moonlight. I turned in every direction, unsure where I was supposed to go, or what I should be doing. In...

At long last, Chapter 51! I got stuck in a hole trying to juggle a million scenes and rewrote half of them, but it's finally here. 52 is almost done and will NOT take as long. Many thanks for the reviews, SM! ~Chapter 51: Overwhelmed~ “So there was another one today,” Darren announced...

Plane trips continue to be my Designated Time to Read Hands of Creation. These notes are somewhat scattered since it was just a bunch of disjointed comments left in the notes app, so I'll attempt to work it into something cohesive. 100-101 Fascinating to get that look into how the Zygarde...

Chapter 66 If there's one thing that's universal across worlds, it's complaining about the postal service taking too long. :P ohhh my god, just like that their cover is blown. xD It really is a small world. Okay, I can't really give them too much flack for letting themselves be overheard...

Chapter 64: Oh my god, seeing Nagant actually happy about something--and not just happy, giddy--is not something I ever expected to see. xD (And hey, she kinda needed this after what she's been through recently. Oh snap. I can't remember if it already got revealed before that they're working...

~Chapter 50: Invites and Warnings~ After several days of training with legends and discussing plans for spying on the Rockets, it was kind of nice just taking a day off to watch the finalists practicing for the unofficial league. The stands were mostly empty—it was just practice matches...

It would seem that plane trips are just the designated time when I read HoC. I actually read about half of these in January, and then the other half on a plane trip in May, and then some more during my trip last weekend. Let's see if I can try to get some coherent thoughts out. 91-93 Good to...

Aaaaand this chapter really should have only taken a few weeks but it took a few months as usual. Enjoy! ~Chapter 49: Human and Legend~ It felt kind of surreal being back at the same cabin we’d stayed at for two nights following the attack on Indigo. The ranger union was still busy enough...

Thanks tons for the reviews, uA and Sike! And sorry for the long wait, but I'm finally ready to charge full steam ahead into 2021. This chapter actually got split in half while writing, so expect the next one very soon! ~Chapter 48: Choice and Consequence~ Falling. Air rushed past...

Chapters 81 - 90 Alrighty! Combination of Review Blitz on TR and a couple long flights let me chew through another ten chapters! Only... twelve more. Ogod. :'D I didn't manage to grab quotes for all the chapters I read, since about half of them were on the plane. So I'll just go over my...

Chapter 62: Oh man. I'd forgotten that the conflict between the Company and the Empire went back that far. It really helps illustrate the kind of standstill that they're stuck in, and why they're so desperate to use Legendaries to get ahead. I love that literally no one else in the company...

~Chapter 47 Extra: Masks~ Lexx tapped his foot against the park bench that he was leaning against, humming a tune while idly scrolling through posts on his phone. Nothing too engaging, and he was only half paying attention to any of it. Maybe the news would be more interesting. The destruction...

Hot damn uA I'm still in awe of how quickly you chewed through Book 1 and your comments have been an absolute delight. I know I've already said as much in DMs, but I just wanted to say it again. x3 Got some specific replies for Sike too: That's about what I was aiming for! :D A sense that we...

*Glances at timestamp on last review.* Ripperoni. Act III Honestly the world seems like it'd be pretty dang perfect without all the orb fighting. :V Just chuck the orbs into the sun and everything will be fine. Really powerful stuff here. I just generally enjoyed the way you portrayed DM's...

Lexx walked into the office to find papers completely covering every inch of furniture. Sebastian paced back and forth behind his desk, muttering to himself, occasionally flipping through one of the many books that sat propped open on the shelves, which he hadn’t put away in case he needed them...