well if u want to perfect it ud get them to lvl 100 for a start. but...
alakazam- hasty nature, ala's defence is lacking and hasty nature isnt gonna help that. thunderpunch doesnt work anymore for a special sweeper
swampert- needs more physical moves
charizard- nih
rampardos- u want quick...
well lvl 100 pokemon arent any good if they dont know any moves, a level 1 caterpie could beat them(except for when it ran out of moves). And whats with the all male thing sexist
well, there appears to be very little strategy involved, just go hard with lots of attacks. try and add a status changer or something to a few pokemon. someone like u would do better with lucario than umbreon.
bronzor isnt a really excellent pokemon, u may want a physical sweeper. by the way what city is these tournaments in, I live in Brisbane and havent heard anything
well if u want to do battle tower or whatever, u can only use one of each item. it looks good for a 1st try. the 1 thing i would suggest would be teach magnezone magnet rise(makes trait levitate), heaps of pokes know earthquake so its just gonna get owned if its susceptible to ground type moves
for aphysical wall u could try skarmory, they can really do some damage if used well. replacing dusknoir with gliscor probably isnt wise uv already got 2 physical swprs
your natures are really err... average. i mean u give delcatty adamant nature and calm mind. WTF? Lonely nature for blisseys got to be one of the worst considering u dont have 1 physical attack on it- i wouldnt use wish aswell as softboiled- go SB. relaxed tyranitars gonna get run over in speed...
for your dragonite u dont need to teach it that many drgn moves. lose outrage. luxray's spark isnt needed. replace fly on staraptor with uturn and send it out first.