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«Netted Bliss»

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blueguy

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«Netted Bliss»

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» Disclaimer

All custom content, unless denoted in the Credits section, is custom made by blueguy, and cannot be used without permission. BEWARE! If I see a post which does not add anything (even something like "Great update"), I will report it. You have been warned! Please post good, thorough reviews.

» Current Story Arch

"Follow the Silver Butterfree, the sparkles on the wind, and you shall be rewarded" the stories declared in Johto... Most children's belief in these tall tales ebbed away as they grew older, but one boy, one bugcatcher, is different, and he searches for the granter of wishes...

» Characters

Sean
Sean, a boy of 14, has always dreamed of meeting the Silver Butterfree... and so, he began to avidly study and observe bug-type pokémon in the tallgrass, writing every single piece of information into a large tome which he carries around with him. The book, then empty, was given to him by his grandfather before he passed away, and now Sean wishes to coat the pages with his knowledge...

Kaci
The dark-haired Kaci met Sean on Route 29 one afternoon, and has since become the object of his affections, but will the sudden revelation that she too is a bugcatcher shake up the budding relationship?

» Volumes
[ Volume 1 :: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 ]


» Current Page

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» Q and A

Why is your comic called "Netted Bliss"?
There's an expression, I'm sure you've heard of, called "wedded bliss". Since the story revolves around a bugcatchers, who use nets, and there will be some relationships, I decided to make that small play on words and use it as the title.

» Credits
Coronis for Butterfree and Sentret's O/Ws
Gridiron for Johto's maps
Avatar for Bugcatcher's O/Ws
 
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Bu†cH

Braaiiiiiinss......
Another comic? Are ya going to keep up?

Anyways, great first issue!
The originality, the characters, the story, the graphics, the effects, even the title!

You could be the best comic maker in history.
 
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deoxys145

Ring Ring Ring!
you have 3 comics now!? Whoa! The best part is that every single one of them is good!! Keep up the good work on all three!
 

The Sponge

DISCO INFERNO!
Yeay! Another Great Comic From Blueguy...I Wonder How You'll Be Able To Keep Up This, Pokechow and Everstone...Eh..You'll Find A Way, Can't Wait To See Where This Goes! :D
 

blueguy

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Dark Venusaur said:
Its good but whats up with the 5th and 9th part of that comic.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

Try to be more elaborate in your reviews, alright? As for the panels, they are simply close-ups of the characters... does that it explain it?

Sponge_Monkeyz said:
Yeay! Another Great Comic From Blueguy...I Wonder How You'll Be Able To Keep Up This, Pokechow and Everstone...Eh..You'll Find A Way, Can't Wait To See Where This Goes! :D

Thanks! Yes... it will be hard to keep up three comics at once, but I think I'll be able to pull it off...

deoxys145 said:
you have 3 comics now!? Whoa! The best part is that every single one of them is good!! Keep up the good work on all three!

I do... Thank you!

Butchimatic said:
Another comic? Are ya going to keep up?

Anyways, great first issue!
The originality, the characters, the story, the graphics, the effects, even the title!

You could be the best comic maker in history.

Yes, and yes...

Wow! That's one of the nicest comments I've ever received. Thank you!

I'm glad to have had such a nice reception... so I'll treat you to a new page later on today! :) And... *drumroll* I have a new signature! Lookie! Isn't it nice? *goggles at signature*

Anyways... yes... so, update later today... :)
 

Goatman56

Paras is the shiz!
Not such a great start. It seems pretty boring so far and the joke could have been better. But it is only the first comic, so i'll wait to grade.
 
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Feraligator-Kiwi

Guest
Comicmaker Extraordinaire is right. So is this going to be like Everstone, or will it have more humor? I think a mix of the two would be great. As always your comics are original and look great, except I think the zooms look weird. Can't wait for some more!
 
What's with you and Silver pokemon? In this it's a silver buterfree and in our, well nevermind let's keep them in suspense.

So the bug catchers quest is to find the silver buterfree. It's interesting But I'm quite sure this could be fromed into a side quest in pokechow because I doubt you can keep all three active.
 
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Mackenzie

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For starts I like the new sig. About the comic:

Pretty good start, it looks impressive as usual but this is only the first comic so I have no idea what is happening.
It looks good visually and the story has a lot of originality but that humour (If it was) was a bit off.
Keep going would be good advice, so you know Keep going...
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
It's gonna be tough to keep all of these comics up, blueguy!
Well, the beginning was not much of a hooker.
I can't really judge by the start, but let's hope it's as good as the others.

_BC_
 

Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
Here is my honest crit.

This is another search-for-the-treasure comic, which is almost as bland as a journey comic. I think you need to slow down and work with your other comics before you start another one. You need more practice, you're not perfect. You have potential but only if you work for it.

FANBASE: Give crits. The majority of you are blind unintelligible idiots who know nothing about comics. Instead of "I like it", say WHY you like it.

If you're too muxch of a moron to do so, kindly stfu.
 

blueguy

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Snagger Outlaw said:
Here is my honest crit.

This is another search-for-the-treasure comic, which is almost as bland as a journey comic. I think you need to slow down and work with your other comics before you start another one. You need more practice, you're not perfect. You have potential but only if you work for it.

FANBASE: Give crits. The majority of you are blind unintelligible idiots who know nothing about comics. Instead of "I like it", say WHY you like it.

If you're too muxch of a moron to do so, kindly stfu.

I think it's a little bit early for you to be assessing my plot, when you know precious little (other than what you could gather from the teaser text) of it. I do understand your point on slowing down... I tend to take on a bit more than I can chew sometimes, but I would really like to do things this way. Everybody needs more practice. You do, I do, everyone does, and no one's perfect, not me or you. It irritates me when someone of equal or lesser talent speaks to me in such degrading and patronizing terms. Get off your high horse, and then we'll talk.

I do agree that some of these posts have been useless. That's why I'm not responding to all of them, but, if you'll notice, I have a small note about that in my first post.

Controller of Flames said:
What's with you and Silver pokemon? In this it's a silver buterfree and in our, well nevermind let's keep them in suspense.

So the bug catchers quest is to find the silver buterfree. It's interesting But I'm quite sure this could be fromed into a side quest in pokechow because I doubt you can keep all three active.

Well, when I think of the word 'silver', I think of myth, legend, glory and fantasy... Don't ask why... and since the butterfree is a mythical insect, silver fit with it...

While I see where you're coming from, I will disagree. The plot is much more than a simple little quest for a butterfly... and it's subject matter (which is mostly serious) would not have fitten with the characters, situations, and style of Chow.

I've finished Page Two! Go and check it out! :) C + C, please. Remember that you must post a thorough review, saying what you liked, what you didn't, what needs work, and why, or else I'll ignore your post and possibly report it as spam.
 
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Bu†cH

Braaiiiiiinss......
The same old message: Better than the last issue. Something to add there: And yet, one of the funniest issues I've ever read in any comic so far.

No farting on exploding trees (in my comic Wolfhunters) or people yelling NAKED! (in not-my comic Pokechow) is going to top that joke.

Keep up the "Holy crap! It's not crap!" work.
 

deoxys145

Ring Ring Ring!
That new comic waz THE BEST!! It had me holding my stomach the way the girl took things the wrong way! I love this comic. Good work
 

blueguy

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deoxys145 said:
That new comic waz THE BEST!! It had me holding my stomach the way the girl took things the wrong way! I love this comic. Good work

Thank you very much! Her name's Kaci! *points at third panel of second comic*

Butchimatic said:
The same old message: Better than the last issue. Something to add there: And yet, one of the funniest issues I've ever read in any comic so far.

No farting on exploding trees (in my comic Wolfhunters) or people yelling NAKED! (in not-my comic Pokechow) is going to top that joke.

Keep up the "Holy crap! It's not crap!" work.

Well, I hope I'll top the last one with each page, but you should keep in mind that NB is similar to E in that it won't always be "good" because a number of pages makes up an issue as a whole.

Thanks!

Unfortunately it'll be a while till the next comic, as I'm at someone else's house against my will. *grr* Byebye! More reviews would be appreciated in the meantime!
 

Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Great update!

-_-''

Can't resist, sorry. Anyway, nice comic. I like the humor, and the text boxes are shiny! The plot is very interesting too.
 

blueguy

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Alrighty, ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, the third installment of Netted Bliss is up and ready to be viewed! :) So, go check it out and give me your comments, criticisms, and opinions! Remember to post a thorough, useful review, please. I apologize for the wait, but I was away from the comp all of yesterday, and some of today! >_<

Netted Bliss :: page three
 

Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
That guy scares me. But I have to admit he's good at manipulating girls.
 
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P-Man

Guest
Ugh... Can't you make anything other than pokemon comics?

Anyways, FIX UP GARYS HAIR!!! IT HAS PURPLE OUTLINES!!

I had a comic once and I put garys head on a sprite. It looked crap. What did I do? Get rid of the purple outlines. did it look better? Hell yse.
 
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