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10 Years Later(One-Shot, Original Trainer)

Nylf

Well-Known Member
Okay then, either today or tomorrow is Pokemon's tenth anniversary. Either way I'm close. And, I have written a commemorative one-shot to recognise Pokemon’s tenth anniversary. Go me. Despite the way it sounds, this is a one shot. I swear.

Ten Years Later…


You ever notice how on Saturdays you can sleep to dinner when nothing important is happening, but when something really good happens you wake up about twelve hours earlier? Yeah, well, that’s how that was for me, back when I started this morning.

I woke up really early. You always do on your birthday. Still, I wonder now, what was I so excited about?

It’s the usual story by now. It’s been this way for exactly ten years, since some boy from my hometown left on his journey with his Pokemon. I was doing the same. Barely stayed for breakfast actually, I was that excited. And again, I do wonder why?

You never really look at things in detail till after you’ve done them, do you? Well I don’t. I rushed over to the professor’s lab, took my Pokemon, y’know, those really powerful creatures that are more varied than anything you’ve ever seen. Well I decided I’d follow in that kid from ten years ago footsteps. I picked a Charmander, those weird red lizards who walk on two legs and can’t take showers because otherwise their tail flame will be extinguished and they’ll die, and left.

Then the moment I stepped onto Route 1, the first step on my adventure, I realized something. What was I getting myself into?

The kid from ten years ago, he did great things. He stopped this massive evil conglomerate, Team Missile or something, I can’t remember. He raised his Pokemon to ridiculous levels, and caught everything, even Legendary Pokemon! There’s this rumour he even caught this weird Pokemon which was made by Team Jet or whatever they were called. He helped exorcise spirits in Lavender Tower, this place were people bury their deceased Pokemon. And he became the champion of the Elite Four. All in one year!

Now, they expect me to do it. This kid even met this girl, don’t know her name but she was from Pallet too, and now they’re happily married. The big deal is that they started dating in that year. I mean, just because I’m from Pallet, everyone expects me to go out and be wonder boy, version two point zero. Do they seriously think I can stop another Team Motorbike, capture the legendaries and find true love, in just a year and on my own? I mean, it’s a bit much isn’t it?

I mean, I’ve only just started, and the first thing the Professor says is,

“I have high hopes for you,”

Yeah right! I mean, come on. I flunked every lesson at his classes, and he expects me to be some uber trainer? You’re joking, right?

And my mum, she says,

“All boys go on journies eventually, it says so on TV. Don’t worry, I know you can do it,”

Do WHAT!? I’m going on a journey, with a lizard, and no map because my best friend’s sister is as tight as an Arbok’s coils! And she knows I can do what exactly? I never told her anything, except I always wanted to be like what's his name from ten years ago.

Now I look at it, all those thoughts, those dreams, what were they? I wanted to be just like him, another ultimate trainer, another hero. But now, as I take my first steps, I have to wonder, why should I be another him? I mean, I’m not him, am I? I’m me. With all this pressure, being the only starting trainer this year in Pallet, being the kid who picked a Charmander, wearing the same baseball cap, it makes me wonder if I can do it. Sure he did it, but as I said, I’m not him.

Makes me think I should just quit. Everything they say, become a trainer, get money, riches, fame, it all seems a little…pointless now. They seem to want every trainer to be just that, every trainer. They want us all to be another wonder boy or girl from ten years ago, to do great things, and to win their battles for them.

I’ve made my mind up. I will go on this journey, but I’ll do it my way. I’m not going to be another wonder boy. I’m going to be me, whether anyone likes it or not.

Ten years. One decade. One tenth of a century. Whatever you call it, it’s gone. Ten years of a legend is great. But it’s time for a new legend.

My legend.



Read, review, enjoy, etc. I know it's short, I can't write long one-shots.
 
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icemew

Banned
Wow...that was awesome, a really original look at it. And the whole Missile/Jet/Motorbike bit was funny.
 

xXFallenButterflyXx

cherry BLOSSOM.
Team Jet, blasting off at the speed of light! =0

You spelt Professor wrong...

But anyways, it seems pretty good. I'll be keeping meh eyes on it! What region is this set in? I bet Hoenn... but Treecko is a gecko... and it might not be Treecko at all! @_@

~;267; Fallen
 

Hidden Mew

Fog Trainer
That was really good. I really liked how this new trainer wanted to be unqiue instead of being like all of the other trainers. The Team Jet stuff was really funny too. I may write a pokemon poem sometime soon, thanks to reading all of these celebrations for Pokemon's tenth year.
 

IceKing

Sexorific!
Team Missle...XD That cracked me up.

A nice little tidbit of a very practical view on pokemon training. I loved how you made everything about the kid from ten years ago so unrealistic and incredibly stupid. I've never been able to grasp how someone can beat the Elite Four in less than one year when the Elite Four people have been training all their lives... My favorite part is when he said the professor had high hopes but he flunked every single class. I thought you needed good grades to go on a pokemon journey though o_0 You know what you should have done? You should have said something about his mother saying "all boys go on journies. It said so on tv" That line always cracks me up XD

Overall, this fic is pretty nice and funny. Might wanna slow down the pace a little bit, it went a bit too quickly.

IceKing...out!
 

Bigbrother87

Helping Hand
Yeah, it was a little on the short side. But I thought it was a great read anyway.

Are you planning to write a different story using this made up kid? Or someone like him? Since you said this was REALLY just a one shot and all.

Kudos to the missile/jet/motorbike thing too. Shows Team whatever has been over used in the games.
 

Nylf

Well-Known Member
icemew: Dang straight, I did that on purpose. Hehe, I can just imagine Team Motorbike frankly.

xXFallenXX: Thanks, I'll fix that. But i don't think you've quite grasped this fully. It's a ONE-SHOT. One only. It's designed to be evil. It's just a random monologue.

Hidden Mew: Thanks, man, I never thought the team joke would be this popular. And yeah, go ahead with the poem thng, I'll probably look myself if you do.

IceKing: You think my kid cared if he got good grades? Anyway, they were desperate, I mentioned he was the only child old enough to go on a journey, and how it's all traditional for Pallet to churn out a wonder boy everyday. And that's the line I wanted, I just couldn't remeber that. It cracks me up too, says a lot about media in the Pokemon world. I'll proabably edit it in.

And I suck at slowing down. All my ideas come at once, so it's really hard for me to go slowly as I want to use an idea when I get it.

BB87: Thanks, but nah. It's just one of those random things you do. Anyway I couldn't use him. All my protagonist trainers start with a Shiny Trapinch called Nylf Schwarz Draconis (Insert number here, I-IV currently). But thanks anyway, it was more to mock Team Rocket for their stupid name and khow the poor boy couldn't remember it.

Thanks for all your reviews, I appreciate the help.
 

Saya

Member for 15 years
Now that was something I've never seen before. I think it's a good tribute to Pokemon and how long it's been around. Ten years is quite a while to me (especially because I'm only 14) but to others it is not. You know, if Pokemon were following the real world time Ash would be 20 by now, or nearly so? But, of course, Pokemon would be a completely different show then. I agree with the boy beginning his journey. It's ten years later; not everything has to be the same. This boy wants to start his own legacy and I believe he is absolutely right for doing it.

The technical aspects of your one-shot were great, though I did notice some phrases and words that did not sound quite right. Description was good, word tense was fine, and grammar and all the rest of that jazz were great. I found the length to be perfect for my somewhat short attention span as well. :p

I really enjoyed your one-shot and I hope to see more of your work soon!

Keep up the great writing!

~Saya~
 
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